Thursday, February 23, 2012

Dream Walk




run towards the moon,
with your dreams curled in your tongue, 
brave as white stallion 


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we dreamwalk through life,
a caterpillar on leaf,   
unfold your wings, fly  




Note:  D'verse Poets Pub:   Writing Visuals - Talks about Chinese and Japanese Poetry - Drop by for an interesting read ~ I feel all of of us will benefit from this article. 

Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 24- Dream Walk ~  


picture credit:   here

19 comments:

  1. "run towards the moon" an invitation I accept gladly!

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  2. These are beautiful....I was going to choose a favorite, but both are fantastic...

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  3. I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It's awesome.

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  4. I like these Haiku very much, especially the second. Thank you.

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  5. I am a moon lover. So will run to the moon together with the dreams I have. Love this haiku very much. Thank you for sharing.

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  6. "Unfold your wings and fly . . . " how beautiful that sounds. I think too often in life, we have our wings tied down or clipped due to some kind of unrealistic fear.

    Lovely writings. :)

    -Mara
    http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

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  7. Very motivational, Grace! Love it. And thank you for the link to D'verse Poets Pub.

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  8. This loon will definitely run towards the moon..haha...really liked that line.

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  9. i want to ride the white stallion

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  10. Very beautiful Grace! I enjoyed except felt the flow breaking a little with repitition of 'Your' in second line of first haiku....my discomfort, that.. expressed..

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  11. These are both absolutely beautiful! I especially loved the first one. Excellent crafted thoughts and words :-)

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  12. "...and the sunlight grasps the earth
    and the moon beams kiss the sea,
    what is all this kissings worth
    if thow kiss not me?". Blythe

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  13. Conjured up some lovely images in my imagination, Grace - and who knows maybe I'll see them in my dreams tonight!

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  14. Lovely imagery created. Thank you for sharing ~~
    I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  15. I love the second one, unfold your wings, fly

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  16. beautiful Grace.. particularly I loved the second one madly.. Thanks!

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