Thursday, February 23, 2012

Dream Walk




run towards the moon,
with your dreams curled in your tongue, 
brave as white stallion 


~0~0


we dreamwalk through life,
a caterpillar on leaf,   
unfold your wings, fly  




Note:  D'verse Poets Pub:   Writing Visuals - Talks about Chinese and Japanese Poetry - Drop by for an interesting read ~ I feel all of of us will benefit from this article. 

Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 24- Dream Walk ~  


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19 comments:

  1. Laura MariaFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:42 PM

    "run towards the moon" an invitation I accept gladly!

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  2. Susie ClevengerFebruary 23, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    These are beautiful....I was going to choose a favorite, but both are fantastic...

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  3. ayalaFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:13 PM

    I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It's awesome.

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  4. ElleceeFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:21 PM

    I like these Haiku very much, especially the second. Thank you.

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:27 PM

    I am a moon lover. So will run to the moon together with the dreams I have. Love this haiku very much. Thank you for sharing.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:54 PM

    "Unfold your wings and fly . . . " how beautiful that sounds. I think too often in life, we have our wings tied down or clipped due to some kind of unrealistic fear.

    Lovely writings. :)

    -Mara
    http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

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  7. AsniFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:56 PM

    Very motivational, Grace! Love it. And thank you for the link to D'verse Poets Pub.

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  8. Pat HattFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    This loon will definitely run towards the moon..haha...really liked that line.

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  9. zongrikFebruary 23, 2012 at 10:20 PM

    i want to ride the white stallion

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  10. Ramesh SoodFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    Very beautiful Grace! I enjoyed except felt the flow breaking a little with repitition of 'Your' in second line of first haiku....my discomfort, that.. expressed..

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  11. --February 24, 2012 at 12:50 AM

    These are both absolutely beautiful! I especially loved the first one. Excellent crafted thoughts and words :-)

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  12. Tarang SinhaFebruary 24, 2012 at 1:34 AM

    Beautiful haiku and picture!:)

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  13. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)February 24, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    "...and the sunlight grasps the earth
    and the moon beams kiss the sea,
    what is all this kissings worth
    if thow kiss not me?". Blythe

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  14. MaryFebruary 24, 2012 at 8:24 AM

    Very nice Haiku!

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  15. sonsylassFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    Conjured up some lovely images in my imagination, Grace - and who knows maybe I'll see them in my dreams tonight!

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  16. becca givensFebruary 24, 2012 at 7:57 PM

    Lovely imagery created. Thank you for sharing ~~
    I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  17. Blossom VydrinaFebruary 24, 2012 at 11:43 PM

    I love the second one, unfold your wings, fly

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  18. Someone is SpecialFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:41 PM

    beautiful Grace.. particularly I loved the second one madly.. Thanks!

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  19. Andy SewinaFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:36 PM

    Yeah, I do like this, nicely!

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