loud chirping of birds
rousing deep wintery sleep,
music of springtime
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soft laughter ringing
under sticky marshmallows,
music to my ears
Written for Haiku Heights: Prompt is Music
and Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February: Day 1- Any Topic
Music I like to hear, as that means spring is near and no more snow, surely the way to go.
ReplyDeleteThey are both delightful!
ReplyDeleteah music too my ears also...I love..soft laughter ringing under sticky marshmallows,
ReplyDeletesticky marshmallows ... many a good laughter revolve around that line!!
ReplyDeleteDE-lightfully done ~~
soothing. :)
ReplyDeleteSticky marshmallows - Dead good!!!
ReplyDeletenice...the second makes me think of time with my boys....
ReplyDeleteGrace,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the Haiku Challenge... I can hear the pleasant music in your words.. Loved it..
Someone is Special
Nice ones..
ReplyDeleteYes it is wonderful to wake up to the sound of chirpy birds
I like both very much, but love the second one. You must have kids. ;)
ReplyDeletemusic indeed :) especially the first one!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the wonderful comments.
ReplyDeleteYes, I do have kids and that is what we were doing last weekend - eating sticky marshmallows ~
sound very pleasant
ReplyDeleteNice pair of haiku. I especially love the first one. Thank you for sharing Grace.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
Lovely set of haiku and beautiful picture!:)
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed both, but as we're freezing here at the moment, the first was lovely.
ReplyDeleteThese are completely different, but they are both wonderful! I especially love the first one.
ReplyDeleteI would never have paired music and marshmallows--but it works!
ReplyDeleteYes to the Music
I love that spring time music :) Its so serene and soothing to hear!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku & senryu. Esp loved the 2nd; very subtle. salute
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku
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