foot pointing outward,
chin facing crowd, bold as sun
rising from the clouds
~0~0
arms curling in step,
straight as her back, she pauses
arrow poised to fly
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
This is beautiful, Grace!
ReplyDeleteBold as sun...lovely..and the photograph perfect :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery!
ReplyDelete"arrow poised to fly" I like that. Very nice haiku
ReplyDeleteSet up and ready to soar, I hope she breaks a leg, in the nice way of course..haha
ReplyDeletewell that's very bold
ReplyDeleteThe boldness of one who knows the steps..that will dance whether she has an audience or not...lovely work
ReplyDeleteI love them all, but the first is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed Grace. loved reading these two nice haiku.
ReplyDelete~bold as sun~
ReplyDeletelovely...!!!
An arrow! She is an arrow! Fascinating!
ReplyDeletePainted Images here and here
Divine ... seems everyone is shining with this image!! I am delighted with your interpretation! Here is my Day 22.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate and thank you for your suggestions to keep me in line!:)
Awesomely written ....Liked them both :)
ReplyDeleteI love the picture you paint of the spirited young dancer!
ReplyDeletearrow poised to fly - you've got my imagination racing!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful Grace!!!!!!!!
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