true faces hiding
with pretty masks, deceiving
one and all, but us
one and all, but us
~0~0
twain from the same vein
we look up to the blue sky,
off tangent we fly
~0~0
twin mirror staring
well of bare flesh and dark words,
our clouds and bane
we look up to the blue sky,
off tangent we fly
~0~0
twin mirror staring
well of bare flesh and dark words,
our clouds and bane
picture credit: here
smart haiku on twins, wow.
ReplyDeletelove the imagery.
The words you choose and weave into your haiku poetry reveals your keen eye and rare talent. I am enjoying each one very much!
ReplyDeleteI also enjoyed meeting you in the interview earlier this week...neighbor:) I hail from the KW area.
My twin is a cat, that pretends not to be Pat. How about that?
ReplyDeletenice haiku...so are you a twin? you have me curious now...
ReplyDeletethere seems to be such magic in twins...love how you captured the essence of twins in your haiku
ReplyDeleteIntriguing...left me wanting more:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome! You wrote 3.
ReplyDeleteGood three! Or should I say 2, you know what I mean!!!
ReplyDeleteNicely!
Very cool!
ReplyDeleteThanks ~
ReplyDeleteI have twin sisters, and twin brothers in law. Happy day ~
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteExcellent twinies!
ReplyDeleteGreat job. Nice images of twins.
ReplyDeleteTwins, always, make me feel so dreamy. Beautifully penned! :)
ReplyDeleteThree takes on the same subject...three different ways of seeing twins...
ReplyDeleteNot Acrostic, but My Choice!
elegant image Grace!
ReplyDeleteVery smart set with intricate insight provided for the reader. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteVery clever.
ReplyDeleteVery clever, great pic too. I have twin nephews. They were so identical as children we could never tell them apart and they used to play tricks in us because of that. LOL
ReplyDeleteI loved your two's... beautiful one..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
love it,
ReplyDeleteincredible.
I thought, what an interesting take on the experience of being twins. Then I noticed the acrostic and was even more impressed.
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