run towards the moon,
with your dreams curled in your tongue,
brave as white stallion
~0~0
we dreamwalk through life,
a caterpillar on leaf,
unfold your wings, fly
Note: D'verse Poets Pub: Writing Visuals - Talks about Chinese and Japanese Poetry - Drop by for an interesting read ~ I feel all of of us will benefit from this article.
Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February: Day 24- Dream Walk ~
picture credit: here
"run towards the moon" an invitation I accept gladly!
ReplyDeleteThese are beautiful....I was going to choose a favorite, but both are fantastic...
ReplyDeleteI love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's awesome.
I like these Haiku very much, especially the second. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI am a moon lover. So will run to the moon together with the dreams I have. Love this haiku very much. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDelete"Unfold your wings and fly . . . " how beautiful that sounds. I think too often in life, we have our wings tied down or clipped due to some kind of unrealistic fear.
ReplyDeleteLovely writings. :)
-Mara
http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com
Very motivational, Grace! Love it. And thank you for the link to D'verse Poets Pub.
ReplyDeleteThis loon will definitely run towards the moon..haha...really liked that line.
ReplyDeletei want to ride the white stallion
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful Grace! I enjoyed except felt the flow breaking a little with repitition of 'Your' in second line of first haiku....my discomfort, that.. expressed..
ReplyDeleteThese are both absolutely beautiful! I especially loved the first one. Excellent crafted thoughts and words :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku and picture!:)
ReplyDelete"...and the sunlight grasps the earth
ReplyDeleteand the moon beams kiss the sea,
what is all this kissings worth
if thow kiss not me?". Blythe
Very nice Haiku!
ReplyDeleteConjured up some lovely images in my imagination, Grace - and who knows maybe I'll see them in my dreams tonight!
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery created. Thank you for sharing ~~
ReplyDeleteI'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.
I love the second one, unfold your wings, fly
ReplyDeletebeautiful Grace.. particularly I loved the second one madly.. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteYeah, I do like this, nicely!
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