heavy wooden cane
scrapping the red dusty bowl,
louder than child's cries
~0~0
she edges slowly
towards door of no return,
white windows open
Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February: Day 3- Picture Prompt
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
A bit of an end and a new beginning, sad and happy, ying and yang, frik and frak, Pat and cat, enough of that..haha
ReplyDeleteThis touched me! Deeply! You write so well. Especially haiku. :)
ReplyDeletelove haikus:))
ReplyDeleteA new life begins and another one walks toward the white window...lovely haiku
ReplyDeleteTouching and beautiful take on the image.. :-) Grace :-)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Poignant take on the prompt. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis leaves me speechless. Well done.
ReplyDeletescrapping the red dusty bowl
ReplyDeletethis paints such a powerful visual image ... well done!
Yeah, I like the way you got inside her head with the second one. Great description on the first!
ReplyDeleteRemarkable one!
ReplyDeleteStrong imagery in both.
ReplyDeleteThat second one gave me a bit of a chill. Beautiful work, Heaven.
ReplyDeletehaiku is cute to read,
ReplyDeleteyou never fail,
charming write.
Wow, this is so poignant. Beautiful!
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