Tuesday, February 14, 2012

On the ground





White ball on the ground
mud splattered with children's play
ready for springtime 


~0~0


rain falling on grass
washing away frowns and cries,
sunflower blooming


~0~0


The long dusty road
is unpaved with stones and sticks,
bring your smile and thirst






Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 15- Paint the Image
    

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15 comments:

  1. Pat HattFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:02 PM

    Who couldn't think happy thoughts with such a smiley face, although the mud might mess with my ocd..haha

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  2. Susie ClevengerFebruary 15, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    There is such fun and joy in your haiku...they made me smile

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  3. KarenFebruary 15, 2012 at 12:15 AM

    A great trio! I'm ready for spring.

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  4. AmberFebruary 15, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    rain falling on grass
    washing away frowns and cries,
    sunflower blooming

    I love this!!! :)
    Joyful set of haiku. :) <3

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  5. ...February 15, 2012 at 3:44 AM

    Delightful.. :)

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  6. Andy SewinaFebruary 15, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    I like the thought of rain washing away frowns and cries!

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:09 AM

    I am ready for Spring ... the muddy snow has melted here and the streets becoming dry and clean. No ... ball playing in the snow and mud. Lovely haiku triplet.

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  8. Ramesh SoodFebruary 15, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    I feel happy to see chains of haiku.. expressing different thoughts.. well done..

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  9. AsniFebruary 15, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    Wow! That second haiku is beautiful.

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  10. kaykualaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:17 AM

    A string of haiku is refreshing. They can stand alone or in a combination. That makes it more interesting!

    Hank

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  11. Mark WindhamFebruary 15, 2012 at 9:04 AM

    great expansion on the first. Optimistic outlook

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  12. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺February 15, 2012 at 9:20 AM

    Lovely set of haiku...I loved the second one more :)

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  13. Brian MillerFebruary 15, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    ha i really like that last one...unpaved with stones and sticks...smiles...that is a great description...

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  14. Someone is SpecialFebruary 15, 2012 at 4:06 PM

    So much of joy! Loved it Grace..

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  15. becca givensFebruary 15, 2012 at 6:49 PM

    rain washing away frowns and cries

    Nice imagery!!

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