young lost boys
unloved, forgotten,
black tattoo
~0~0
calls of hate,
needles of venom,
dead peacock
~0~0
cult of love,
winds of forgiveness,
redemption
Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February: Day 25 - Cult Form: - Haiku Structure: - 3-5-3 . Thanks for your visits.
Ohhhh now I love this! Amazing the power that can be packed into just 3 lines. 'The Lost boys'- amazing film. This is one of those poems that I can just identify with completely. nicely done
ReplyDeleteIn each haiku is a "cutting" line! The one that lashes out for me is "dead peacock"! Dramatic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma for noticing this. I would like to stick to the traditional way of writing haiku ~
DeleteNice work...I like the second the best
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed these Haiku, my favourite is the third. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLovely set of haiku. Each one has at least one 'strong' line. Great!
ReplyDeleteA tough subject to write a haiku on! I like "winds of forgiveness."
ReplyDeleteThe last really has such powerful presence in the words. Also like the movie use too and you didn't use a crummy sequel, big points for that..lol
ReplyDeletenice...love the movie...a fav growing up...and great contrast or transition from the second to third...
ReplyDeleteGreat one!...I loved the second one...powerful words to describe the emotions
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing :)
Humanity
calls of hate..needles of venom..powerful words Ms.Grace but true..passing by ;)
ReplyDeleteSo sad...Pity lonely boys... The winds of forgiveness and cult of love must help them...
ReplyDeleteTaking all three segments together dazzles my mind!
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Well penned. The first one was my favourite. Your words echoed ignorance and a lack of love and care.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I like the way this progresses from lost and forgotten, to forgiveness and redemption. The Haiku moment for me was 'Black tattoo'. Phew!
ReplyDeleteGrace, each haiku is profound. Your last haiku is exquiste.
ReplyDeleteI like the movie
ReplyDeleteVery dramatic set ... Tough subject -- fine interpretation. Thank you! Here is my Day 25.
ReplyDeleteA set of haiku I could read many times and not tire of - great story telling
ReplyDeleteWonderful set! I love the progression to redemption.
ReplyDeleteLovely set Grace..! You are so cheerful to all.. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteOh, one of my favourites!
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