Sunday, February 5, 2012

Thoughts on the sea



thoughts on white paper
 coasting along the blue sea,
    mudsrocks and shales break    

~0~0~


broken shell,   
sea
 unforgiving 




Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads:   Photography by Richard Schear


I am part of the Few Miles Haiku Challenge for 2012:
Day 6 – February 6th – Theme or Word: Think Form: Haiku & Pi-Ku - Pi-Ku, is a derived form with syllable structure 3-1-4.



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24 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorFebruary 5, 2012 at 8:44 AM

    This suits your "everyday amazing" header really well - it is an art to see the beauty of familiar things.

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  2. Pat HattFebruary 5, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    Can see it in the pic, as your words describe it out and out. Maybe they forgot the bottle though?

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  3. LillyFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:04 AM

    wonderful example for this stage of the challenge :)

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  4. Maude LynnFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:23 AM

    Beautiful!

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  5. Tina´s PicStoryFebruary 5, 2012 at 11:06 AM

    what a lovely natural frame :)

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  6. MaryFebruary 5, 2012 at 1:35 PM

    A beautiful write!

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  7. Brian MillerFebruary 5, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    nice...i like the natural elements in this...and the blend with paper...with our pens creating our own world...

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  8. ayalaFebruary 5, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    Lovely!!!!! I love the sea!!!!

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  9. ayalaFebruary 5, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    I am adding this to my blogroll :)

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  10. Kay L. DaviesFebruary 5, 2012 at 4:43 PM

    "thoughts on white paper
    coasting along the blue sea"
    These lines are so beautifully written!
    K

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  11. Andy SewinaFebruary 5, 2012 at 8:29 PM

    Phew, now you've got me thinking about the sea!

    Nicely!!

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  12. CressidaFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    Lovely..will read this again!

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  13. LolamouseFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Beautiful way to combine the photo prompt and the haiku/piku! I love the idea of thoughts on white paper.

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  14. Isadora GruyeFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:54 PM

    i like your juxtaposition of white paper thoughts coasting on a sea. viva la

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  15. becca givensFebruary 6, 2012 at 1:54 AM

    ooooh, very nice!

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:00 AM

    Wonderfully crafted haiku and pi-ku. And that picture ... wow!

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  17. CadFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:39 AM

    Your words coasted well...

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  18. Preeti S.February 6, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    Intriguing write. Well written.

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  19. Laurie KolpFebruary 6, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    Grace- Beautiful, as always.

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  20. KarenFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    Beautifully written Grace!

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  21. br!nDleFebruary 6, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    Awesome...:)

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  22. Someone is SpecialFebruary 7, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    Grace..Beautiful.......

    Someone is Special

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  23. MargaretFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    Well, I focussed on broken shell. The sea and ocean (and any kind of water) I am a bit fearful of ... yes, unforgiving I see them.

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  24. DaydreamertooFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:33 PM

    Lovely.

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