Monday, February 13, 2012

Love



you are my morning
embrace in snow veiled garden,
dazzling as the sun


~0~0


you are my green grass
shelter of restless spirit, 
anchor in the storm


-0~0


you are my evening
home in the forest, cradling 
my sharp claws to rest


Happy hearts day everyone !!!

Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 14- Love


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25 comments:

  1. Laura MariaFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:19 PM

    How beautiful Grace!!!

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  2. Pat HattFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:28 PM

    And they'd called it puppy love oh wait, that be kitty love..haha.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:33 PM

    Well done Grace, your lover must be special. I can read that in your words.

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  4. MaryFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:44 PM

    Ah, Grace, the picture is so touching; and your words are even more so!

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    It is a cliche, but I've got to go with the picture is worth 1000 words. ~Mary

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  6. Ostensible TruthFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:49 PM

    ah I do like extended haikus, I often find a lonely haiku missing that "finish" I like to see in a poem - I also like how you've kept true to the precedent established in the first one (oh dear, legalese creeping through) - the "you are's" the "embrace/shelter/home" then the last line contrasting sharp or frenetic things with peace - the anchor - claws to rest - nicely done!

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    1. GraceFebruary 13, 2012 at 7:08 PM

      Thanks for the compliment. I try to stick to the original haiku form of contrasting images instead of just trying to fit it into 17 syllables.

      If you like this set, please visit my other blog ~

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  7. paulo guimaraesFebruary 13, 2012 at 7:05 PM

    So beautiful and warming, goes well with the picture. Excellent work!

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  8. AsniFebruary 13, 2012 at 7:21 PM

    A beautiful tribute to the one you love.

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  9. LolamouseFebruary 13, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    Beautiful, Grace. I love how you set this one up.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 13, 2012 at 10:33 PM

    Very beautiful - just perfect! Love the picture too.

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  11. Susie ClevengerFebruary 14, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    This beautiful...a love story of the most unexpected kind

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  12. NobleFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    indeed very beautiful :)

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  13. The UnknowngnomeFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    Beautiful seems to be the word here. Pic and words are one.

    Wishing you a happy SVD.

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  14. Sri ValliFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:40 AM

    Loved the comparisons...with morning, evening and green grass....Lovely haiku

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  15. ...February 14, 2012 at 3:58 AM

    Speechless!

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  16. Andy SewinaFebruary 14, 2012 at 4:13 AM

    Yeah, I get the feeling of being totally encompassed in love.
    Happy Valentines Day!

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  17. Cressida de NovaFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    I love the picture and words.

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  18. Brian MillerFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:49 AM

    timeless love...an love the tiger pic too....

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  19. becca givensFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:49 AM

    Love infused!!

    Happy Heart's Day to you!! Enjoy a piece of chocolate!

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  20. Tarang SinhaFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Lovely set of haiku!:)

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  21. AmberFebruary 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    Wow!!! Awesome picture too! :) <3

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  22. Someone is SpecialFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    beautiful set of Haiku! Loved it Grace!

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  23. Savories of lifeFebruary 14, 2012 at 7:21 PM

    Come see my giveaway!

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  24. SuzyFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:38 PM

    Love your haiku, particularly the second one. Love the picture too - tigers are my favourite animal.

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