Monday, February 27, 2012

Everyday




words to celebrate
everyday is amazing,
white pink orchids bloom

~0~0

a maple leaf buds 
on this grey winter morning,     
every day is spring    
  
~0~0
 
the leaf falls today,
like everyday, but I see
blue butterfly wings


~ My favorite poetry form is couplet ~



I am fragile glass
in summer storm

I am torn wing
in autumn wind

I am folded page
in winter snow

I am blushing pink
in spring's ardent arms

I am everyday
beautiful in your eyes.



Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 28 - Blog Name Prompt. We also have to include another poetry form.   Thanks for the visit and comments.


 
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26 comments:

  1. --February 27, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    An absolutely *gorgeous* post from start to finish! I love the poetry and the picture is so pretty in pink :-)

    "the leaf falls today,
    like everyday, but I see
    blue butterfly wings"

    I especially like this :-)

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  2. sonsylassFebruary 27, 2012 at 6:33 PM

    I agree with the Princesa - absolutely :-)

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 27, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    These are all awesome and gorgeous. Thanks for letting us read and be part of your every day amazing verses.

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  4. Susie ClevengerFebruary 27, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    So beautiful in image and words...yes, everyday is amazing

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  5. LauraFebruary 27, 2012 at 7:08 PM

    Love your couplet...I've never played with this form...something new to play with:-)

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  6. ColorblindFebruary 27, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    everyday is spring...love that line :)

    love how you put words together.

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  7. AsniFebruary 27, 2012 at 8:06 PM

    The orchids are gorgeous and your composition of haiku and couplets are just awesome.

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  8. ✿Sie✿February 27, 2012 at 8:16 PM

    wow..weeeeeee..Ms.Grace your poem is so sweet and refreshing..I love the orchids image..it is so beautiful..passing by Ms.Grace ;)

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  9. Pat HattFebruary 27, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    You're really bringing spring forth with your words, wish it was that easy with mother nature..haha..more snow tonight, fun!

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  10. ElleceeFebruary 27, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    Grace. simply said, this poetry is beautiful.

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  11. Maude LynnFebruary 27, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    This is really gorgeous, Grace!

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  12. EllaFebruary 27, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    Grace,
    This was stunning! You guided our journey with such great reminders of beauty~
    Well Done

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  13. Brian MillerFebruary 27, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    nice way to work your blog name in there...ha...i like the couplet version the best....

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  14. ...February 28, 2012 at 2:23 AM

    I loved the interconnection between 'Amazing' and 'Spring'!
    And I am speechless,after a glance at your couplet.
    It bought out the true beauty of your soul.
    I'm touched,Grace.Thank you :)

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  15. Andy SewinaFebruary 28, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    Beautiful!

    Love those blue butterfly wings too!

    HQ!

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  16. Ramesh SoodFebruary 28, 2012 at 8:19 AM

    Each line is amazingly beautiful...weaved so very well.. like it..

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  17. br!nDleFebruary 28, 2012 at 9:57 AM

    ~I am blushing pink
    in spring's ardent arms~

    loved it ma'am....
    just awesome...:)

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  18. becca givensFebruary 28, 2012 at 10:17 AM

    Splendid ... I have not tried couplets ... you created it to flow eloquently.
    Thank you for sharing with us!! Here is my Day 28.

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  19. ashokFebruary 28, 2012 at 10:37 AM

    It was a joy reading this...cheers!

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  20. Vidya SuryFebruary 28, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    You are beautiful in my eyes, Grace. This is "everyday amazing"! A joy to read!

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  21. Mark WindhamFebruary 28, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    beautiful in form and words

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 28, 2012 at 2:44 PM

    Elegant and poignant words. They touch my soul. Thank you.

    Magical and Mystical

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  23. Blossom VydrinaFebruary 28, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    the leaf falls today,
    like everyday, but I see
    blue butterfly wings

    all lovely, this my favorite

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  24. Sri ValliFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:59 PM

    I can see the nature's beauty through your words....Couplet poetry is lovely too :)

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  25. Аи ТомБунДинFebruary 29, 2012 at 2:13 AM

    Wonderful!!! Amazing!!! So nice flowers and so great words!!! Thank you for them!

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  26. Someone is SpecialMarch 1, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    Amazing poem.. Thanks Grace.. Sweet..............

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