"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
Nice job, really like these, In the first, the kitten image is universal and the two-word consonance works well in walled window. In the second one, I really like the inversion of typical diction, really comes off strong. Thanks
Nicely done Grace, you have painted with words and made this picture a true haiga. Thank you for sharing.
Your haiku really do tell a story.
Liked the kitten reference indeed, of course you prob knew that..haha
lost as a stray kitten...u turn that one well...
lost as a stray kitten..such a universal image that all can understand...nice work
Oh, the first one is poignant. Lost as a stray kitten...excellent.
Beautiful haiku....Loved first one more...Loved the comparison 'Stray Kitten'
Reflects poignance and helplessness.Beautifully crafted.
Wherever she walks, she carries her green wall with her...Waiting for the Women
I too, favor lost as a stray kitten ... to me it sealed the image of helplessness and tragedy. I always look forward to your interpretations, Grace! You never disappoint! :)
Lost eyes. Troubled eyes :-(
That first one is my favorite. You really captured the picture.
i'm afraid i'm just echoing everyone else, but i love the stray kitten reference... and, as Mama Zen said, you really did capture the picture!♥
That's a perfect take on the image.. Sad, touching and beautiful Grace..
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