Sunday, February 12, 2012

Smile



smile of a young boy 
holding the white balloon close,
brighter than the sun


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he flashes his smile
wider than birthday balloon,
blue candles flicker 


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the smile of a child
paints the room in yellow glow,
casting blues of snow


Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 13- Paint the Image
    

15 comments:

  1. Lovely! All three of them! :) <3

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  2. Yeah I suppose their smile can even make blues of snow not seem so bad, nice ones once more at your shore.

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  3. smiles...hes got a great smile does he...smiles.

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  4. His smile melts my heart. Lovely set of haiku. :)

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  5. Lovely haiku describing how beautiful his smile was...Enjoyed reading them

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  6. Yeah, I like the way you developed this!

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  7. Smiling children playing with balloons wonderful. Love the third one.

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  8. I like the image of a smile as a paintbrush or a painter...

    A Painted Image

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  9. aww.. I loved all the three.. Happy and thanks for writing such beautiful ones..

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  10. Great set of innocent joy, Grace!! Thank you for sharing your version ~~ have a great week!

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  11. I am sure it says something terrible about me that I do not trust that child's smile. ~Mary

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  12. Such an interesting thought "casting blues of snow." I am captured a bit.

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  13. lovely haiku, Grace! and i agree with Terri ~ "casting blues of snow" is enchanting!

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