without clothes & shoes
No explanations were given
in short meeting & email that followed-
I went back to my office cube
& checked my watch-
It was still stuck to one hour plus+
Like a stubborn dial or broken wheel
My 30 min. lunch break vanished in 1 min.
while my 10 min. advisor negotiations
ambled slow, stealing half of my day -
I fall into this hard-to-break habit:
Time
Per Hawking's theory
are of two types - real &
Imaginary (like a tea time to a child)
Tomorrow is a tyrant
if things aren't done today, so I
smooth yesterday's files into
wrinkle-free pages, as if time neither
expanded nor collapsed but held its breath -
I type my decision: No
change in the pricing! (Keep the client happy)
Then I think of pushing out
to sea in the boat & calling time out -
Why did you leave me here?
Stuck with box of hanger coats
They're a burden to carry -
But I hesitate
to scamper after time
yelling: Come & Be Happy here !
I'm rooted to this office
Where everyone invents & misses numbers-
Usual culprit: There wasn't enough time
4:00 pm
I go home & untie
time & space as if they're ribbons in my hair-
They scamper polka dotted marbles
Settling in their picture frames, contented -
But I'm not-
My poster reads - Don't Disturb me!
Into a "wormhole" (Hawking's term)
I slip slide slow
Reading words again
again
Now here lies a mystery:
Even at first glance
I know them intimately like a lover's body
Evening pulls
palmed milky, combusted of stars
I gaze at blue crinkling sky,
shimmering, an eternal pond -
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nice....you capture a bit of the feel of time too...everything rushing in at once...we trying to make decisions...the things we need are too short, the things we'd rather escape run long...i like hte push out to sea and calling time out...ha...if only...i understand...smiles.
ReplyDeleteSounds like my day ~ If only.... Thanks Brian ~
DeleteThey say that in parallel dimensions, & on the other side of the veil, time does not exist, the eternal now, what we see as past, present, & future stretches out on one wonderful plain/plane. DST always disturbs me, emotionally & physically. Why in hell don't they just leave it alone; would please millions. I love your lines /I go home & untie time & space/as if they're ribbons in my hair/.
ReplyDeleteInteresting theory of time, us giving it labels (past,present & future) is only for convenience ~ I would love time travelling though, if only ~ Thanks Glenn ~
Deletei think our nature rebels continuously to the fleeting nature of time...the things we have no time for.. when time drags endless...when it runs... we're forced to live with it and would rather want to break free...the pushing out to sea sums it up beautifully..
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia ~
DeleteThis resonates with how I feel these days..time flying by..great capture.
ReplyDeleteOh this could be days of mine recently... time is out... and can you capture it with a time-out... and we are just slaves to the clock.
ReplyDeleteI can certainly relate to your poem Grace! Too often we seem to runout of time. I like how you have expressed it. I was drawn into your poem right from the start!
ReplyDeleteGrace this is a great piece about the nature of time. Loved it. >KB
ReplyDeleteA captivating read. Time is a timeless thing... I guess. Loved your words and how they came together building this crafty creation. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
love the way this poem was crafted..time; at one end of the pendulum a precise and demanding aspect, at the other end..an illusion. Imagery is great..enjoyed the rhythm and flow.l.nice poem
ReplyDeleteI felt rushed reading this ~ in a good way though. I hope you get the chance to slow down and that your client is happy :-) Have a ….calm day, enjoyed your work production ~ smiles
ReplyDeleteyes the rush screams through here - one of the very first poems I wrote as a yiung child came back to my mind as I read your words --
ReplyDeletetime passes fast when you want it to last, time passes slow when you're sad, time is so funny I think that its queer, time makes alarm clocks ring in your ear, time is the stuff that you read on your clock, time will go on, if you like it or not
I go home & untie
ReplyDeletetime & space as if they're ribbons in my hair
love this - a great & timely exploration of effects of time (real &/or imaginary) on our daily lives
O, a whole day with you and numbers and the non-cooperating clock! I love the fulcrum of the poem where you untie time and space like hair ribbons. I love that the destination is the eternal pond.
ReplyDeleteLove the spunk in this:
ReplyDelete"I go home & untie
time & space as if they're ribbons in my hair-
They scamper polka dotted marbles
Settling in their picture frames, contented "
and the maturity of the cosmos that seems to answer back in the closing stanza. Lovely poem~
this chimes so damn true:
ReplyDelete"I'm rooted to this office
Where everyone invents & misses numbers- "
"I go home & untie
ReplyDeletetime & space as if they're ribbons in my hair- " Grace I really loved the whole poem, this line in particular.
I do hope you will send me something for the gratitude quilt… would love your heart, your voice to be part of it.
Time, such an eviscerated thing....
ReplyDeleteYes - there are two time dimensions according to the theories - clock time, and a closed time dimension - a mystery to everyone! Nicely captured.
ReplyDeletethere are some fabulous plays on words in here Grace - really made me smile.
ReplyDeletea great poem about time and how it controls us...love how you come home and untie it from your hair that's feels like a great feeling... hope you have less hectic days in the future. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the word play throughout the poem, it's really clever. I can empathize 1000% with the daily battle with time.
ReplyDeleteTime is elastic as you say depending on what you are doing.
ReplyDeleteI dedicate this song to you. I love your poem beautifully written and embraceable.
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Hope you like the song...it fits well with your poem.
:)
Inception - Wow, I love it ~ Thanks for sharing Charlie ~
DeleteI can so relate to this Grace. Doesn't that half-hour lunch break really feel like a minute? We give ourselves away each day and feel so fortunate if we do have the time and energy to even share a poem. Loved this write.
ReplyDeleteLove this! Especially the stanza:
ReplyDeleteTomorrow is a tyrant
if things aren't done today, so I
smooth yesterday's files into
wrinkle-free pages, as if time neither
expanded nor collapsed but held its breath -
This is amazing. Extremely well put together!
ReplyDeleteI liked this, as if our lives are a mobius strip of events...
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Great ride through the day & your thoughts. :-)
ReplyDeleteI love the way you've captured time in this piece, great write.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I had time to read this piece. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of you "untying time and space as if they're ribbons in my hair". What a way to describe freedom. :-) I enjoyed this poem, Grace.
ReplyDeleteOh! yes i completely agree with this. Being in different profession other than poetry one has to take out time to write it, but still we find joy in it.
ReplyDeleteBravo Grace! I love, "untying time and space as if they're ribbons in my hair" and the marbles...we
ReplyDeleteall know how they go~
I loved your ending!
An awareness of time requires reflection. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteStory of my life! Ah, that feeling of never enough time, of the relentless race... And then, by contrast, that last stanza, pulling ourselves out of the tick-tock,
ReplyDeleteGrace,
ReplyDeleteThis is so smart, and your perceptions are so to the mark. Wonderful examples of the tyranny of so-called time, contrasting so well with the striking image of the eternal you capture in your sky. This is a wonderful poem, one of my favorites of yours.
so many good moments in this, like the one minute lunch, but esp liked, "I go home & untie
ReplyDeletetime & space as if they're ribbons in my hair- " - something so very real and alike to me ;-)
ah dear is amazing and yes is hard work like you in a office wuth the time to lunch, time sometimes you don't have andall days run to home ( I worked like secretary about 20 years until w
ReplyDeletesorry! until wr adopted our twins!!
ReplyDeleteTime passes so slowly slowly at work and so quickly at home and in a blink during lunch. This was very well done. As always, thank you. Have a beautiful week!
ReplyDeleteI love this - you really captured so many essences of time here.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely adore this poem, Grace. The elasticity of time, creatively drawn. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGoing on to long the things you want gone and the things you want barely sticking around, yuck, but seems we all are stuck in it at our ground
ReplyDeleteThis feels so familiar and actually seems like today, even though I'm "retired." (Huge myth) Catching up after no Internet access and happy to be back in poetry time!
ReplyDeleteGrace, I remember the 9-5 world, and you encapsulated the experience so well, it almost made me nervous, wink... I appreciated your references to Hawking. I sometimes wonder about him... being in that limited physical state and pondering time. Seems almost fitting; at other times, ironic.
ReplyDeleteA very solid write, my dear. Amy
It does seem like we race against the clock...or seem limited by it. Really great writing Grace!
ReplyDeleteIt
ReplyDeletes always a happy time to escape the system it seems..
To transcend to a reality that is ReALLy real...
I never even bothered to change my clocks. Time is only relevant to them who own a calendar.
ReplyDeleteVery good! Love this. It reminds me of how so many cultures view time very differently.
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