Friday, February 10, 2012

To see





to see the world in
different colors and phases,
blessed gift to share  


~0~0


to see the bright side  
in others, forget yourself, 
like the sinking sun 


~0~0


desires and wants flee
like firecrackers on new year,
live a simple life


~0~0


desire to be one
with nature, peaceful thoughts come
amidst rock garden 





Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 11- Paint the Image .
and Haiku Heights:   Prompt #106 is Desire   
    


picture credit:  here

30 comments:

  1. Grace ... this is really a nice series of haiku. You paint the image very well.
    I love the last one the most.

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  2. Grace, i love this...
    desire to be one
    with nature, peaceful thoughts come
    amidst rock garden

    Lovely!

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  3. A mini story in haiku, look at you. I see and I like!

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  4. These are beautiful...the third one is my favorite..desires and wants flee..

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  5. I appreciate each one ... if I had to choose a favorite - it would be the last one. Bravo, Grace. Have a great weekend!

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  6. You've captured the pic perfectly in your haiku.

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  7. Forget yourself like the sinking Sun.. you say it all in this one line.. beautiful.. RS:)

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  8. I am enchanted!

    I loved the first three Haiku.
    'desires and wants flee'-Lovely FOS :)

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  9. All exquisite. Love the third one best. :)

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  10. I'm hoping that the firecrackers of my desires will all explode and leave me only the essentials...


    A Painted Image

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  11. desire to flee the firecrackers and lead a simple life...yeah felt at times...

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  12. absolutely nice Grace, lova haikus!

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  13. awesome photo ~ lovely moving haiku ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  14. to see the bright side
    in others, forget yourself,
    like the sinking sun

    its the best one in all.

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  15. Such a lovely series of haiku. I really like the second...forget yourself, like the sinking sun...excellent!

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  16. Each haiku is a pearl of wisdom! Really nice! :) <3

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  17. This is a wonderful series of haiku. I love that it is so uplifting and positive.

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  18. The first two especially, I like - you've interpreted the image as a metaphor and point of departure, like a jazz musician, and this works well for me.

    (Thanks for all your encouragement and for introducing me to dVerse originally).

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  19. These are beautiful and peaceful, Grace. Lovely.

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  20. These are lovely! The second is my favorite.

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  21. Charming! I loved the ones about the snails also!

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  22. Beautiful set of Haiku.. Loved it Grace!

    Someone is Special

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  23. Love the last one especially. Melting into nature...

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  24. I like the entire series of Haiku..
    thank you for sharing.
    Peace
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  25. I wish that desired simple life we get soon :-)

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