Tuesday, February 14, 2012

On the ground





White ball on the ground
mud splattered with children's play
ready for springtime 


~0~0


rain falling on grass
washing away frowns and cries,
sunflower blooming


~0~0


The long dusty road
is unpaved with stones and sticks,
bring your smile and thirst






Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 15- Paint the Image
    

15 comments:

  1. Who couldn't think happy thoughts with such a smiley face, although the mud might mess with my ocd..haha

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  2. There is such fun and joy in your haiku...they made me smile

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  3. A great trio! I'm ready for spring.

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  4. rain falling on grass
    washing away frowns and cries,
    sunflower blooming

    I love this!!! :)
    Joyful set of haiku. :) <3

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  5. I like the thought of rain washing away frowns and cries!

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  6. I am ready for Spring ... the muddy snow has melted here and the streets becoming dry and clean. No ... ball playing in the snow and mud. Lovely haiku triplet.

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  7. I feel happy to see chains of haiku.. expressing different thoughts.. well done..

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  8. Wow! That second haiku is beautiful.

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  9. A string of haiku is refreshing. They can stand alone or in a combination. That makes it more interesting!

    Hank

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  10. great expansion on the first. Optimistic outlook

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  11. Lovely set of haiku...I loved the second one more :)

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  12. ha i really like that last one...unpaved with stones and sticks...smiles...that is a great description...

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  13. rain washing away frowns and cries

    Nice imagery!!

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