"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
Ohhhh now I love this! Amazing the power that can be packed into just 3 lines. 'The Lost boys'- amazing film. This is one of those poems that I can just identify with completely. nicely done
In each haiku is a "cutting" line! The one that lashes out for me is "dead peacock"! Dramatic!
Thanks Gemma for noticing this. I would like to stick to the traditional way of writing haiku ~
Nice work...I like the second the best
I enjoyed these Haiku, my favourite is the third. Thank you.
Lovely set of haiku. Each one has at least one 'strong' line. Great!
A tough subject to write a haiku on! I like "winds of forgiveness."
The last really has such powerful presence in the words. Also like the movie use too and you didn't use a crummy sequel, big points for that..lol
nice...love the movie...a fav growing up...and great contrast or transition from the second to third...
Great one!...I loved the second one...powerful words to describe the emotions Thanks for sharing :)Humanity
calls of hate..needles of venom..powerful words Ms.Grace but true..passing by ;)
So sad...Pity lonely boys... The winds of forgiveness and cult of love must help them...
Taking all three segments together dazzles my mind!Virgin’s cult
Well penned. The first one was my favourite. Your words echoed ignorance and a lack of love and care.
Yeah, I like the way this progresses from lost and forgotten, to forgiveness and redemption. The Haiku moment for me was 'Black tattoo'. Phew!
Grace, each haiku is profound. Your last haiku is exquiste.
I like the movie
Very dramatic set ... Tough subject -- fine interpretation. Thank you! Here is my Day 25.
A set of haiku I could read many times and not tire of - great story telling
Wonderful set! I love the progression to redemption.
Lovely set Grace..! You are so cheerful to all.. Thanks!
Oh, one of my favourites!
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