Tuesday, August 1, 2023

French Onion Soup

When I made this soup in our first month of

marriage, it was a soggy soup of tasteless onions 


But you finished it all up anyway

Embracing me for my (lack of) cooking skills


Time was the best ingredient in the kitchen

I know that now after more than 3 decades of


family & raising the children

There is no perfect recipe to follow, but practice


makes it easier.   I didn't know that white, not

yellow onions, was the best for this recipe


That I needed to cut & stir the many layers of buttered

peeled onions (10 cups) for a long time (at least 40 minutes) in a pot


I did not know that the long caramelizing process

brings out the sweetness of the onions


Peeled away are silky translucent skin

Turning the color of char & slightly brown under the fire


Adding garlic, fresh thyme, wine & bay leaves 

Made this chicken stock richer, flavorful than I ever thought 


possible.   Pair with buttered bread and white wine

You sighed with delight over this (heavenly) soup


How is it possible that (you say) you have

never changed at all - you are still as beautiful 


when I met you.   I smiled at you and noted that you

are not wearing your glasses.   The french onion


soup made you giddy, I say.   I wipe away the

stains from my hands, now slightly wrinkled, bent & patient 



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Poetics - Peeled Away with guest host Melissa Lemay.    Join us when we talk all about onions when the pub doors open at 3pm EST.    And yes, I now know how to make this delicious French Onion Soup.   

17 comments:

  1. What an interesting metaphor for life and love, Grace. Onion soup and marriage both take practise and perseverance, as you say, ‘Time was the best ingredient in the kitchen’. Thank you also for the tip about using white not yellow onions and the best cooking time for caramelising onions. I smiled at these lines:
    ‘How is it possible that (you say) you have
    never changed at all - you are still as beautiful
    when I met you. I smiled at you and noted that you
    are not wearing your glasses…’

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  2. You took me back to the first time I ever cooked anything for a date.😆 It did not turn out well. “Time was the best ingredient in the kitchen” stood out for me as well. What a beautifully written testament to practicing commitment and learning and growing together.❤️

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  3. This is such a gorgeous use of metaphor here, Grace! I especially love this part; "I did not know that the long caramelizing process brings out the sweetness of the onions." Yes! 💖💖

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  4. Grace, dare I say it, your poem is Onion Soup for the Soul <3 So intimate and loving between two souls.

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  5. Your poem is slow in the making, but rich and satisfying. (I have the same sort of memories of making risotto)

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  6. I love this poem, Grace. The unfolding and metaphors--really wonderful. I was thinking of onion soup and the caramelizing when I was writing mine, and I'm kind of craving onion soup now.

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  7. Nice one. I cannot say i had such an experience, i did cookery and home economice at high school and i was pretty good😊

    Happy Tuesday

    Much💖love

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  8. This is wonderfully heartwarming. I love that your soup evolved over the years into something really special!

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  9. I marvel at how you turned onion soup into something intimate about life.

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  10. I mostly take the shortcut of sweating onions in a microwave but to make the sort of soup you describe here takes, as you say, at least 40 minutes care and a lifetime of love and learning - delicious...

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  11. I've never read a sweeter love story, Grace, tenderly written with a cook's hands. Just a beautiful read. I loved it.

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  12. There is an element of unconditional love that runs through this and I like the layout of this poem. Each piece feels like another layer of growth in life, love and soup making. So beautifully done. Thanks for the cooking tips as well!

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  13. Yes everything gets better with time, patience and devotion to details. I love your onion soup story Grace. I too made onion soup a long time ago and I was thrilled with its taste ☺️

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