"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
Absolutely beautiful images in this! Doesn't seem forced at all. You are SO GOOD at this!
Thank you...Just comes with a lot of practice and counting my fingers..ha..ha..
Continuing to bring forth great haiku's each day, I hope that last coin was at least a loonie and not a penny though..hahaha
nice...love the repitition and you def have nice flow and great imagery..i like heaven
This is beautiful...giving is such joy no matter how much you have to give
Wonderfully done. The poem goes around in a circle and is simply perfect.
I corrected mine..thanks for pointing it out...I think I have just been lost in memories of my mom the past two days.
No problem..I am just being fussy with the form...just ignore me, if you like..Thanks for the visit ~
Well done, Grace :)
I really enjoyed this - picture perfect..
sweet as red cherries, and a turtle dove sings - wonderful repeating lines, and 'giving the last coin' speaks volumes.
When you give your last coin - that's truly giving, giving out of love.
what I nice message from few words Ms.Grace ;)
A beautiful message. Reminds me of the story of the widow's mite.
So very sweet and romantic! The sounds are so soft and gentle!And thank you for taking the time to suggest a tweak in the 2nd line of my haiku! But the tweak you suggest is actually 8 syllables (sharing -2 some-1 experiences -5)! The line I have is the necessary 7 (sharing -2 experiences -5)!
Everyone has said what one could.. still I would like to tell you that I have enjoyed it so much... lovely ..
Beautiful and heart-felt.
This is great!
Very beautiful haiku....and a great message :) Thanks for sharing :)A burning candle
Lovely imagery ... flows flawlessly from one to another until it comes full circle! Thank you for sharing. Here is my Day 23.
I've read them all, and I must return to tell you this is my favorite of the day! Again, thank you! :)
Such beautiful imagery!
So very sweet, Grace. Hugs!
the greatest gift is from those that have nothing to give, and they are so often the greatest givers.
these all paint pretty pix
I enjoyed it so much Grace.. Thanks!
Thank you for your comments and visit. I appreciate them ~