Friday, February 3, 2012

Hot and Cold


crystal snowflakes fall
cup of steaming chocolate,
morning sun glitters

~0~0

dried roses petals
tea bag dipped in warm water,
soothing bitter tongue  

~0~0

hot pancakes and milk   
on bright sunflower platter, 
melting ice glaciers
  


Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 4- Opposite Emotions



picture credit:   here

28 comments:

  1. Enjoyed these greatly. Seldom try Haiku. I am beginning to think I should. I want 'hot pancakes and milk' badly!

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  2. Loved your Haiku.. dried roses petals, tea bag dipped in warm water, soothing bitter tongue.. wow :-) I am happy to have you as a part of Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  3. These are so good...I cant choose a favorite...amazing work

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  4. Like how you weaved them from hot to cold and cold to hot. Add them together and after thing gets nice and warm, just right.

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  5. Beautiful imagery. Well done!

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  6. Ma'am Your writings are tremendous...I love the way u put Words To your Feelings...(:

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  7. sounds like a good morning to me...smiles...we are on a bit of the same wave length as well...as you will see in the morning...smiles.

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  8. Beautifully(temptingly)jotted.
    Made me hungry!

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  9. Delightful morning set ~ melts the winter cold with warmth!!

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  10. You painted a wonderful picture with these set of haiku, love the picture also. Very well ... thanks!

    Namaste

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  11. these three haikus are beautifully descriptive :)

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  12. I like the first one best. No, the second one after reading it again. Wait, that third Haiku is sure lovely. :)

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  13. Lovely set of haiku. Makes me feel warm and at home. You have captured the opposite emotions so well!

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  14. I love this dear sound warm and comfort and beauty of course!

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  15. lovely haiku, warm, inviting image!

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  16. Great haiku to warm this winter morning!

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  17. Deliciously soothing and unique! Loved them! :)

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  18. I really like the juxtaposition of hot and cold. Well written.

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  19. Ooohh! I like each of these, and especially the first! I can visualize that steaming chocolate, nearly smell it, and the snowflakes and sun!!!

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  20. I liked the first and third of these best - I think it's the strength of the contrast (or possibly that I don't drink tea...).

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  21. really, I MUST part from reading blogs and go eat now...you've gotten my stomach growling. Beautiful trio here.

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  22. quite sweet and heartwarming piece.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  23. Very tasty - I am off to get a snack!:)

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