Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Music



loud chirping of birds
rousing deep wintery sleep,
music of springtime

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soft laughter ringing
under sticky marshmallows,
music to my ears




Written for Haiku Heights:   Prompt is Music  
and Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 1- Any Topic


22 comments:

  1. Music I like to hear, as that means spring is near and no more snow, surely the way to go.

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  2. ah music too my ears also...I love..soft laughter ringing under sticky marshmallows,

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  3. sticky marshmallows ... many a good laughter revolve around that line!!

    DE-lightfully done ~~

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  4. nice...the second makes me think of time with my boys....

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  5. Grace,

    Welcome to the Haiku Challenge... I can hear the pleasant music in your words.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  6. Nice ones..
    Yes it is wonderful to wake up to the sound of chirpy birds

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  7. I like both very much, but love the second one. You must have kids. ;)

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  8. music indeed :) especially the first one!

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  9. Thanks for the wonderful comments.

    Yes, I do have kids and that is what we were doing last weekend - eating sticky marshmallows ~

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  10. Nice pair of haiku. I especially love the first one. Thank you for sharing Grace.

    Namaste

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  11. Lovely set of haiku and beautiful picture!:)

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  12. Enjoyed both, but as we're freezing here at the moment, the first was lovely.

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  13. These are completely different, but they are both wonderful! I especially love the first one.

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  14. I would never have paired music and marshmallows--but it works!



    Yes to the Music

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  15. I love that spring time music :) Its so serene and soothing to hear!

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  16. Lovely haiku & senryu. Esp loved the 2nd; very subtle. salute

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