Monday, April 23, 2012

Bliss



heads closer,
eyes closing in bliss,
simple joys 

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simple joys
sharing one journey,
a lifetime

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a lifetime
sunrise and sunset,   
move closer

Posted for Haiku Heights:   Bliss


This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month.


Picture credit:   here

21 comments:

  1. Beautiful cascading haiku, sounds like love blossoming. I like the photo, too :)

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  2. A lovely set of haiku and a beautiful picture. I think it's true that swans mate for life - its my wish that more of us could do that. I like the words "simple joys" as well. Thank you.

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  3. Like the weaving up and down, you did and so true, nothing better than finding someone to share the journey with.

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  4. Very lovely, and perfect with that picture.

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  5. sharing the journey...now that is priceless...smiles...

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  6. Wow!...beautifully penned Grace...You painted that picture very well :)

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  7. Oh so beautiful... the closeness shared by two people, blissful moments indeed!

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  8. "a lifetime
    sunrise and sunset, " as simple and powerful it can get!

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  9. Magical haiku and such a beautiful photo . Complements each other :-)

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  10. All three perfect, but that last one had a punch: so true.

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  11. Awesome picture! Love the haiku you have written to this nice picture. Swans are living together their whole life. Their love is forever and unconditional. We can learn so much from the swans.

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  12. Simply beautiful.

    "heads closer,
    eyes closing in bliss,
    simple joys" - My favourite verse. :)

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  13. What a beautiful composition. loved them.

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  14. Very nice. Love the last line carrying over to start it's own piece. Nicely done. Thanks

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  15. I like the way each stanza carries over and yet still remaining a separate unit. 'Simple joys' is what bliss is all about:)

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  16. Lovely cascade ~~~ thank you for sharing.
    Appreciate your visit, Day 24 ~~ Rapture of Color

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  17. Lovely. Just lovely.
    Thank you for sharing.
    The last verse so meaningful.

    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  18. Grace, a lovely trio of haiku. They link so seamlessly and suggest so much. The photo is beautiful, but your poems stand strong on their own.

    Richard

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