heads closer,
eyes closing in bliss,
simple joys
~0~0
simple joys
sharing one journey,
a lifetime
~0~0
a lifetime
sunrise and sunset,
move closer
This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month.
Picture credit: here
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
Nice blessings to you!
ReplyDeleteA lovely set of haiku and a beautiful picture. I think it's true that swans mate for life - its my wish that more of us could do that. I like the words "simple joys" as well. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLike the weaving up and down, you did and so true, nothing better than finding someone to share the journey with.
ReplyDeleteVery lovely, and perfect with that picture.
ReplyDeletesharing the journey...now that is priceless...smiles...
ReplyDeleteLovely write Heaven...
ReplyDeleteWow!...beautifully penned Grace...You painted that picture very well :)
ReplyDeleteOh so beautiful... the closeness shared by two people, blissful moments indeed!
ReplyDelete"a lifetime
ReplyDeletesunrise and sunset, " as simple and powerful it can get!
Magical haiku and such a beautiful photo . Complements each other :-)
ReplyDeleteAll three perfect, but that last one had a punch: so true.
ReplyDeleteGood ones all these... sharp..
ReplyDeleteAwesome picture! Love the haiku you have written to this nice picture. Swans are living together their whole life. Their love is forever and unconditional. We can learn so much from the swans.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful.
ReplyDelete"heads closer,
eyes closing in bliss,
simple joys" - My favourite verse. :)
What a beautiful composition. loved them.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Love the last line carrying over to start it's own piece. Nicely done. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI like the way each stanza carries over and yet still remaining a separate unit. 'Simple joys' is what bliss is all about:)
ReplyDeleteLovely cascade ~~~ thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate your visit, Day 24 ~~ Rapture of Color
Lovely. Just lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
The last verse so meaningful.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Grace, a lovely trio of haiku. They link so seamlessly and suggest so much. The photo is beautiful, but your poems stand strong on their own.
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