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I like your haiku today. I collect shells and other things from the beach where ever I find one - beach that is :-) Thank you.
At first, there seems to be just a lovely description of the seashore. But the last haiku secretes a suggestion that if we take the treasures of the seashore away and attempt to own them, then the beauty of the shore is no more.
Stealing the shells from the beach, how dare you..haha...but they are decorative.
Feel I am on the beach from your delightful haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
I like collecting stones and shells from the beach and display them in vases, too! I especially love your second haiku, very nice :)
Second one is excellent.. RS:)
Love your second haiku!
a bit of sea caught in a crystal vase!
your Haiku is refreshing to my senses as I read and imagined myself picking up one of them and enjoying the seashore..visiting you Ms.Grace ;)
The second one is my favourite!I can imagine your vase full of shells and stones!
I like the second one a lot. I have several dishes and vases of shells but you're right. You just can't capture the seashore and take it home.
Nice! You do haiku well, Grace.
i like gemma's thoughts on this...our treasures sometimes do lose their magic when we separate them...and sometimes they keep just a glimmer....smiles.
Beautiful haiku....I loved second one more! :)
captured the seashore to a "t"thank you for the lovely words.PeaceSiggi in Downeast Maine
Wonderfully composed. Especially the second I love. Well done.
I enjoyed both ... my favorite is the first. This is my Day 9 ~~ Stretches of Seashore.
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