light halo
monk's face in prayer,
plum blooms fall
~0~0
aura of darkness
circles well in the desert,
vulture picks on bones
~0~0
spark of light
positive thoughts, seeds
bloom to sky
Posted for Haiku heights: Aura
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
The first one is breathtaking. Wow!
ReplyDeleteI liked the last one!!!
ReplyDelete"positive thoughts, seeds
bloom to sky" - this idea made me happy!!!
Like a cycle of darkness and light as viewed through the blossoms of Spring! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLoved the first one A LOT!!! Lovely, all three!
ReplyDeleteLoved the last one. You have a typo in "darkness." Love that line as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shawna. I corrected it.
DeleteLove the first " Plum blooms fall "is pure spring! lol
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThese haiku are really lovely, the first is my favourite. Thank you again.
ReplyDeleteThe second is a little scary, I hope those bones are people..haha...last turned it around though and set the scene quite nice.
ReplyDeletesuch utter beauty here today.
ReplyDeletethank you grace
Another great set of Haiku as usual. The second one is my favorite, as I could really see the imagery on this one.
ReplyDeleteLove the theme...and the 3 poems dancing in harmony.
ReplyDelete♥♥♥
These are wonderful. The first one is everything a haiku should be
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set...I loved second one especially
ReplyDelete'seeds to bloom to sky' ~ lovely visual ~ wonderful haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThat middle one tells me a story. I saw the buzzed circling. It was a hot day, sun scorching the earth. The carcass was rotting below, but my motorcycle and I were whizzing by at a high rate of speed. The buzzard didn't know I didn't care he was feeding at the side of the road and i wouldn't have hit him as he feasted.
ReplyDeleteGreat shot of the blossoms. I've seen a lot of these this spring. Beautiful all around.
Peace
i like the thoughts blooming like seeds in the sky....def there is much beyond just what we see...smiles.
ReplyDeleteI loved the Monk's halo. A true picture of an aura indeed.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of positive thoughts like seeds blooming to the sky. And the pitching of light against darkness, darkness to light...Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteDarkness, deserts and vultures.. what a hiaku..that!!
ReplyDeleteI liked the third one most, all are awesome...
ReplyDeleteI like the juxtaposition of the auras.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of three contrasting haiku. The vulture haiku
ReplyDeleteis the most interesting, the other two create tension with the
vulture..or maybe it is the reverse of the vulture creates the
tension.
Thanks for sharing,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
great compilation the contrast of the three makes for fun reading!
ReplyDeleteGreat trio, Grace ... the first is my fav for the day!! Also congratulations on your recent celebration! :) Appreciate your visit for Day 14 ~~ Aura's Band
ReplyDeleteSuch a delicate photo and haiku today, love it!
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