coherent thoughts rise
amidst spiralled rock garden,
gentle hush of leaves
~0~0
broken lips
incoherent words,
grey luggage
~0~0
pen and paper lines
black granite and white pebbles,
zen inspired design
zen inspired design
Posted for Haiku Heights: Coherent
This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month
Picture credit: here
great set of Haiku... :)
ReplyDeleteVery Zen indeed. Perfect for haiku.
ReplyDeleteLove Zen:) and love the picture !
ReplyDeleteIn a Zen world, all cycles smoothly as it should! Beautiful thoughts!
ReplyDeleteAll designed by the nature of the zen and told through your pen, err umm keyboard..haha
ReplyDeletenice...i like me some zen...and the zen gardens...my dad is a woodworker and made me one for my desk...little rake included...so cool...the middle one def speaks of discord so i like there is some peace wrapping it...
ReplyDeleteHow delightfully appropriate.
ReplyDeleteThe coherence we seek is often found in gentleness...
ReplyDelete“Six Takes on ‘Coherent’”
Excellent description and Zen feel. Love the spirals.
ReplyDeleteAwesome thoughts!...nicely penned :)
ReplyDeleteVery zen and enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteYes, I find it everyday amazing here.. beautiful haiku....
ReplyDeletelike i always say every haiku(of yours) amazing!!:)
ReplyDeleteNext to the verse ... this awesome picture ... makes a great haiga. You have painted here with words. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThe third one is my favourite!!! Nice haiku set!!!
ReplyDeleteYou've got haiku nailed, Grace. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSerene ... my fav is the first one!! Day 12 ~~ Coherent?
ReplyDeleteI like what you wrote...thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletePeace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
The zen approach here works beautifully. Eastern coherence.
ReplyDeleteRichard