white long dress
soft floral bouquet,
rice seedlings
~0~0
ashen face
white fear on her eyes,
loud siren
~0~0
white pages
inviting words, thoughts,
busy pen
Posted for Haiku Heights: White
This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month
picture credit: here
The second one with the white fear on her eyes, as each step closer to the end..haha
ReplyDeleteFrom dress to fear to pages - like a creative cycle of white elements! Creative!
ReplyDeleteI almost thought the second haiku was related to the first (e.g., white fear on her face due to her wedding day), until I read the last set. Then I realized, these were separate haiku sets. Very creative indeed, and you caught me by surprise as well. :)
ReplyDeleteThe first one...and the image...both were super awesome...beautifully written... :)
ReplyDeleteah nice fear on eyes, and maybe she have dreams, hope sigh!
ReplyDeleteOoh that 2nd stanza, Grace! Perfection!
ReplyDeleteAnd she still went ahead...'busy pen'.
ReplyDelete1st stanza: The Dream
2nd stanza: Fear of Reality
3rd stanza : The Denial
Creative write and remarkably told.
white pages
ReplyDeleteinviting words, thoughts,
busy pen
a fine way
to give pregnant silence
its due
:)
Ur haiku is of a superlative degree, really!
ReplyDeleteFirst one was sweet.. loved it! Second one spread dread! And the last one smthng all readers wil relate to... :)
Very beautiful..I just moved forward and found moving with the Pen to write: Ah, different colours on the white.. well done Grace..
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful white! This color is very interesting and have long history... They say that about 2 hundreds years ago the color of the bride was red...
ReplyDeleteI'm smiling at the truth in these.
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku is my favorite, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteBeing a writing addict, the third is, of course, my favorite!
ReplyDelete“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”
The images in the first one speak volumes - just lovely. I also like the "busy pen" image in the last - filling in those white pages.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Each one is so special ~ well done ~ 'white fear in eyes' ~ remember that feeling ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteWow..I loved that bridal dress....awesome...and last one is amazing!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful pictures you have painted here. Nice set of haiku.
ReplyDeleteThese are lovely. I especially like the first two. They fit together so well.
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