"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
The second one with the white fear on her eyes, as each step closer to the end..haha
From dress to fear to pages - like a creative cycle of white elements! Creative!
I almost thought the second haiku was related to the first (e.g., white fear on her face due to her wedding day), until I read the last set. Then I realized, these were separate haiku sets. Very creative indeed, and you caught me by surprise as well. :)
The first one...and the image...both were super awesome...beautifully written... :)
ah nice fear on eyes, and maybe she have dreams, hope sigh!
Ooh that 2nd stanza, Grace! Perfection!
And she still went ahead...'busy pen'. 1st stanza: The Dream 2nd stanza: Fear of Reality 3rd stanza : The DenialCreative write and remarkably told.
white pagesinviting words, thoughts,busy pena fine way to give pregnant silence its due:)
Ur haiku is of a superlative degree, really!First one was sweet.. loved it! Second one spread dread! And the last one smthng all readers wil relate to... :)
Very beautiful..I just moved forward and found moving with the Pen to write: Ah, different colours on the white.. well done Grace..
Very beautiful white! This color is very interesting and have long history... They say that about 2 hundreds years ago the color of the bride was red...
I'm smiling at the truth in these.
The first haiku is my favorite, wonderful!
Being a writing addict, the third is, of course, my favorite!“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”
The images in the first one speak volumes - just lovely. I also like the "busy pen" image in the last - filling in those white pages.Richard
Each one is so special ~ well done ~ 'white fear in eyes' ~ remember that feeling ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Wow..I loved that bridal dress....awesome...and last one is amazing!
Beautiful pictures you have painted here. Nice set of haiku.
These are lovely. I especially like the first two. They fit together so well.
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