still as wind,
tree murmurs softly,
last heartbeat
~0~0
he takes the clean brush
painting canvas full of life,
art, still his first love
~0~0
her black eyes
stilled his hopes for love,
white blossoms wilted
picture credit: In Tandem by Jinksy
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
i like the first one a lot
ReplyDeletethree still haiku and-senryu
dynamic love haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku creates a powerful cameo of a thoughtful visual! Delightful series!
ReplyDeleteThank you these are really good.
ReplyDeleteThe middle speaks to me the most, going back to what you want to do no matter the other crap going on.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful take on the haiku, Grace! Lots of inspiration for the artist is welcomed. Great!
ReplyDeleteHank
Ah, wish
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written..
RS:)
Nice thoughts, explained in simple words.
ReplyDeleteWow!!!, got the feel.. heart warming, superb:)
ReplyDeleteThe middle one is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteThe middle one might have been written for me! LOL. I love the way my graphics always look on your clean, white blogpage. Thank you for using them.♥
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful...!!! Second one, too good! :)
ReplyDeleteThere's always an air of serenity about your haiku. Lovely set, Grace. My favourite is the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteSo vivid and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteEach is so different; I like them all. And the second made me think of artwork, which is still and yet lovely - like a poem.
ReplyDeleteRichard
2nd one was WOW... :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done Grace. This reads as a short story .... and short it is wish you had written more.
ReplyDeleteMagical words.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Grace ... can't decide between the first or second as my favorite!! :)
ReplyDeleteDay 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows