Friday, April 27, 2012

Clarity



serene lake
soothing weary eyes,
unturned page

~0~0

green eyed buds
lifting face to sky,
new spring day

~0~0

mountain air
calming ashen cheeks,
sunset view



Posted for Haiku Heights:   Clarity
shared with Haiku My Heart
This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month.


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24 comments:

  1. Tarun MazumdarApril 27, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    you are good and you know that... 2nd one is my favorite...

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  2. PranitaApril 27, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    'unturned page' - love the way you expressed it... :)
    Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 27, 2012 at 3:06 PM

    Beautifully crafted haiku..well done..I mean that's what i always expect here.. and yes..I enjoy reading you grace.. RS:)

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  4. Yellow TulipApril 27, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    Soo soothing scenic u have brought out here ... enjoyed all of them...

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  5. ElleceeApril 27, 2012 at 5:07 PM

    Lovely, soothing haiku. The first is my favourite. Thank you.

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  6. Pat HattApril 27, 2012 at 5:30 PM

    Just a scene that one can use to unwind.

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  7. carol l mckennaApril 27, 2012 at 5:33 PM

    excellent haiku and wonderful photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Fran aka RedondowriterApril 28, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    Each haiku is exquisite, evoking various emotions in me.

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  9. kaykualaApril 28, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    Sensuously beautiful, Grace! Goes well with the pic! Great take!

    Hank

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  10. Sri ValliApril 28, 2012 at 2:20 AM

    Beautiful set Grace, I liked the green bud haiku more!
    Fuddling thoughts

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  11. Tarang SinhaApril 28, 2012 at 3:14 AM

    Beautiful picture and lovely set of haiku Grace!:)

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  12. Adura OjoApril 28, 2012 at 4:07 AM

    The sunset view is great from here. (Aside: Actually we've had dreadful weather all week in the UK. Raining nonstop, grey skies. This morning is no exception). Have a lovely weekend, Grace.

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  13. MaritApril 28, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    I want to be on that place! Lovely haiku!

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  14. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    Picture set the tone for your haiku beautifully!

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  15. Sanjana April 28, 2012 at 8:37 AM

    ur haiku are much above my level..:) i cant help but wonder how you do it! :)

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleApril 28, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    Very serene haiku, love the image. Together with the haiku it makes a wonderful haiga.

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  17. CYNOSUREApril 28, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    an excellent set Grace...3rd one was WOW... :)

    PS: for me its the best set by you... :)

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  18. rebeccaApril 28, 2012 at 3:03 PM

    thoughtful
    serene
    mindfully present.

    all qualities i treasure.

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  19. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 28, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    The "unturned page" still has my heart's attention...

    Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

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  20. AnonymousApril 28, 2012 at 3:24 PM

    Vivid scenes that led to clarity.

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  21. LibbyApril 28, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    I like the third part! I liked them all, but the third part really spoke to me.

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  22. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 28, 2012 at 4:39 PM

    Very nice. Well written.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  23. LauraApril 28, 2012 at 7:33 PM

    beautiful!

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  24. PattiKenApril 28, 2012 at 10:29 PM

    There are some exquisite lines in these haiku. Really nice.

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