Sunday, February 5, 2012

Thoughts on the sea



thoughts on white paper
 coasting along the blue sea,
    mudsrocks and shales break    

~0~0~


broken shell,   
sea
 unforgiving 




Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads:   Photography by Richard Schear


I am part of the Few Miles Haiku Challenge for 2012:
Day 6 – February 6th – Theme or Word: Think Form: Haiku & Pi-Ku - Pi-Ku, is a derived form with syllable structure 3-1-4.



25 comments:

  1. This suits your "everyday amazing" header really well - it is an art to see the beauty of familiar things.

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  2. Can see it in the pic, as your words describe it out and out. Maybe they forgot the bottle though?

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  3. wonderful example for this stage of the challenge :)

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  4. nice...i like the natural elements in this...and the blend with paper...with our pens creating our own world...

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  5. Lovely!!!!! I love the sea!!!!

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  6. I am adding this to my blogroll :)

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  7. "thoughts on white paper
    coasting along the blue sea"
    These lines are so beautifully written!
    K

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  8. Phew, now you've got me thinking about the sea!

    Nicely!!

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  9. Lovely..will read this again!

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  10. Beautiful way to combine the photo prompt and the haiku/piku! I love the idea of thoughts on white paper.

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  11. i like your juxtaposition of white paper thoughts coasting on a sea. viva la

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  12. Wonderfully crafted haiku and pi-ku. And that picture ... wow!

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  13. Grace..Beautiful.......

    Someone is Special

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  14. Well, I focussed on broken shell. The sea and ocean (and any kind of water) I am a bit fearful of ... yes, unforgiving I see them.

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