Outside my window
smoky clouds veil the full moon
to fading star light
but snow falls whitening ground
to a thousand lit candles
~0~0~
A truck rattles by
salting the road wrapped in frost
Above window's edge
crystals drip slow thin daggers
Morning melts like ice cream cone
~0~0~
Houses are skull capped
with thin ice crystals
Trees twist under bed of snow
Morning paints everything white
but for dead leaves, amber framed -
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Thanks for the visit ~ Happy Holidays ~
loved this Grace... you met the challenge full on... what you describe I can see out my window... :)
ReplyDeleteYes, same winter landscape :-)
DeleteWow! Underlying the beauty of Winter is its danger--daggers, scull (caps) and death--but inside the window it lies innocent and glowing.
ReplyDeleteAccidents happen during winter Susan ~ Have to be careful ~ Thanks ~
DeleteBack for another read, Grace. This is such a friendly and exciting space. Have a wonderful week, my friend.
DeleteYou too Susan ~ Take care ~
DeleteHey! Oldies but goodies. Love it.
DeleteI love winter Grace! Im a winter person:)
ReplyDeleteWe should trade places Gloria :-)
DeleteLove your imagery here especially the daggers image.
DeleteI can quite easily believe you think in tanka form when you admire the view from your window. This present winter in all its terrible beauty.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry ~
DeleteGaze at it if you like. But blah I will say, getting more soon at our bay
ReplyDeleteYes, more to come ~ isn't it terrible ~
DeleteBeautiful writing, Grace. We are in for a major snowstorm tomorrow. Sigh. Our snow will be lightening ground to a thousand lit candles indeed. I am not looking forward to this one. I will be hoping the salt trucks you mentioned will be active. I wonder if I will be able to get to my grandchildren's Christmas program with such a 'bed of snow.' Sigh. Merry Christmas to you, Grace.
ReplyDeleteYes, same predictions here ~ Bracing ourselves for a very cold Christmas ~ I hope you can watch the program Mary ~ Merry Christmas to you ~
DeleteI enjoyed seeing the snow from your poetic window, Grace! All the more so as Europe has not had its round of snow yet. Happy Christmas to you!
ReplyDeleteLoads of snow and freezing rain here Gabriella ~ Wishing you Merry Christmas too ~
DeleteThis is perfect. Crystal clear observation of your surroundings.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful tanka with some great imagery. I loved the third one particularly.
ReplyDelete-HA
I'm cold reading your words. So well done! Lovely images, all.
ReplyDelete" but for dead leaves, amber framed " beautiful description of the photo Grace. Enjoyed all three, we're experiencing the same dreadful beginning to winter.
ReplyDeleteGrace, your tanka verses are exquisite and the image ~~ incredible!
ReplyDeleteYou do these so well!
ReplyDeletei really like the second one....the day melting like an ice cream cone...in a few lines you really set the scene from the salt truck to the icicles....wish we had a bit of snow...it was hot out today...int eh 70s...i was in shorts and a tshirt playing soccer...ha
ReplyDeleteSend some heat over here Brian, smiles ~
DeleteA very vivid picture.
ReplyDeletethe last one is breathtaking...deadly grip of winter exposed in wonderful imagery...
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful Grace.."morning melts like ice cream cone" Love that!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the morning melts like ice cream cone- a beautiful soft image you have created ~ smiles and thank you Grace. We had 30 deg today and muggy.
ReplyDeletethe snow falling to the light of the candles is a beautiful image - also the morning melting like ice cream cone ...hmmm...the trees twisting under their snow bed... i wish we had snow...but it's quite warm and more rainy than snowy...sigh... happy christmas time grace... and thanks for all you do in the pub..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful tanka, a realistic picture of what's on the ground now! A grand design for a White Christmas. Great take Grace! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
ReplyDeleteHank
lovely winter images!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful dear Grace, wishing you joy and peace.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured winter in beauty and harshness..the first one is my favorite..wishing you a happy holiday.
ReplyDeleteohh, very nice. i especially like that last one. enjoy, Grace!
ReplyDeleteA nice splash of amber on a glaring white background. Lovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteI loved the ending verse very much, the poem paints a very vivid image in the readers mind. Wish you a very happy holiday Grace. :)
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ankita
what a photo! I especially like the 3rd. Have a good week, Grace ~
ReplyDeleteA glimpse of Canadian winter. I see on the news you are being hammered in the east this winter.....the leaves trapped in ice are fantastic! what a shot that was!
ReplyDeleteOutside your window is quite wonderful with the images you made me feel with this!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sentiment for this season of gratitude.
ReplyDeleteBlesssings Grace!
we were greeted with a crystal landscape across the ridge yesterday - beautiful images beautifully written - lovely, Grace - wishing you the sweetest of Christmases and the most wonderful of new years - K
ReplyDeleteAll around us is crystal too ~ Thanks K ~
DeleteStandalone, these are perfection. Together they are a perfect trifecta, Grace. Just beautiful. I just took some similar ice pics today. We're in the midst of an horrendous ice storm. Sad for all the trees damaged, but stunningly beautiful. Wishing you a blessed and bright Christmas, Grace, and a stunning 2014!
ReplyDeleteOur tree was damaged as well by ice & wind ~ Thanks for the visit Kim ~
Deletenice capture of man vs nature
ReplyDeleteYour words capture my world.
ReplyDeleteBorn to be warm, I certainly admire the sheer beauty of "real" winter--even its fury is awesome.
ReplyDeleteSo long as I have access to your sweet word-and-image descriptions, shall not miss it one bit.
So glad I dropped by today
Merry Christmas.
Thank goodness there are no white skull capped houses here! LOL Loved that idea though...
ReplyDeleteIt has been a long time since i have written Tanka. I do love the form---now the subject matter just made me turn the room heater up Grace.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written.....I loved the last line. Thats so deep....
ReplyDeleteYou are a Tanka artist! Smiles and Merry Christmas to you and yours!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous view
I don't have anything to add but I just wanted you to know that I liked it and felt at peace throughout the reading.
ReplyDeleteI adore winter motifs
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of morning melting like an ice cream cone.
ReplyDeleteGrace, these are beautiful! Quite an image you create with words outside your window! I promise not to complain today when the temperature here starts to drop.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, that picture is amazing. You captured the essence of winter in your poem. As always, thank you! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
ReplyDeleteMorning melts like ice cream cone - I love this what a amazing line and you have captured this so wonderfully. Have a blessed Christmas.
ReplyDeletemerry christmas grace!
ReplyDeletei hope you have a wonderful day with your family
and thank you,
for all you do...
and for you...smiles.
Wonderful poem, love the descriptions in this, really transports me to that snow scene quite beautifully!!
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