Tuesday, April 17, 2012

White



white long dress
soft floral bouquet,
rice seedlings

~0~0

ashen face
white fear on her eyes,
loud siren

~0~0

white pages
inviting words, thoughts,
busy pen



Posted for Haiku Heights:   White


This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month


picture credit:   here

19 comments:

  1. The second one with the white fear on her eyes, as each step closer to the end..haha

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  2. From dress to fear to pages - like a creative cycle of white elements! Creative!

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  3. I almost thought the second haiku was related to the first (e.g., white fear on her face due to her wedding day), until I read the last set. Then I realized, these were separate haiku sets. Very creative indeed, and you caught me by surprise as well. :)

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  4. The first one...and the image...both were super awesome...beautifully written... :)

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  5. ah nice fear on eyes, and maybe she have dreams, hope sigh!

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  6. Ooh that 2nd stanza, Grace! Perfection!

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  7. And she still went ahead...'busy pen'.

    1st stanza: The Dream
    2nd stanza: Fear of Reality
    3rd stanza : The Denial

    Creative write and remarkably told.

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  8. white pages
    inviting words, thoughts,
    busy pen


    a fine way
    to give pregnant silence
    its due
    :)

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  9. Ur haiku is of a superlative degree, really!
    First one was sweet.. loved it! Second one spread dread! And the last one smthng all readers wil relate to... :)

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  10. Very beautiful..I just moved forward and found moving with the Pen to write: Ah, different colours on the white.. well done Grace..

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  11. Very beautiful white! This color is very interesting and have long history... They say that about 2 hundreds years ago the color of the bride was red...

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  12. I'm smiling at the truth in these.

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  13. The first haiku is my favorite, wonderful!

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  14. The images in the first one speak volumes - just lovely. I also like the "busy pen" image in the last - filling in those white pages.

    Richard

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  15. Each one is so special ~ well done ~ 'white fear in eyes' ~ remember that feeling ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  16. Wow..I loved that bridal dress....awesome...and last one is amazing!

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  17. Beautiful pictures you have painted here. Nice set of haiku.

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  18. These are lovely. I especially like the first two. They fit together so well.

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