Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Coherent


coherent thoughts rise
amidst spiralled rock garden,
gentle hush of leaves 

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broken lips
incoherent words,
grey luggage

~0~0

pen and paper lines 
black granite and white pebbles,
 zen inspired design 


This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month

Picture credit:    here


19 comments:

  1. Very Zen indeed. Perfect for haiku.

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  2. Love Zen:) and love the picture !

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  3. In a Zen world, all cycles smoothly as it should! Beautiful thoughts!

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  4. All designed by the nature of the zen and told through your pen, err umm keyboard..haha

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  5. nice...i like me some zen...and the zen gardens...my dad is a woodworker and made me one for my desk...little rake included...so cool...the middle one def speaks of discord so i like there is some peace wrapping it...

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  6. Excellent description and Zen feel. Love the spirals.

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  7. Yes, I find it everyday amazing here.. beautiful haiku....

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  8. like i always say every haiku(of yours) amazing!!:)

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  9. Next to the verse ... this awesome picture ... makes a great haiga. You have painted here with words. Awesome!

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  10. The third one is my favourite!!! Nice haiku set!!!

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  11. You've got haiku nailed, Grace. Well done!

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  12. I like what you wrote...thanks for sharing.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  13. The zen approach here works beautifully. Eastern coherence.

    Richard

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