Friday, April 27, 2012

Clarity



serene lake
soothing weary eyes,
unturned page

~0~0

green eyed buds
lifting face to sky,
new spring day

~0~0

mountain air
calming ashen cheeks,
sunset view



Posted for Haiku Heights:   Clarity
shared with Haiku My Heart
This is part of the National Poetry Writing Month.


Picture credit:  here

24 comments:

  1. you are good and you know that... 2nd one is my favorite...

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  2. 'unturned page' - love the way you expressed it... :)
    Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku

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  3. Beautifully crafted haiku..well done..I mean that's what i always expect here.. and yes..I enjoy reading you grace.. RS:)

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  4. Soo soothing scenic u have brought out here ... enjoyed all of them...

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  5. Lovely, soothing haiku. The first is my favourite. Thank you.

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  6. Just a scene that one can use to unwind.

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  7. excellent haiku and wonderful photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Each haiku is exquisite, evoking various emotions in me.

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  9. Sensuously beautiful, Grace! Goes well with the pic! Great take!

    Hank

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  10. Beautiful set Grace, I liked the green bud haiku more!
    Fuddling thoughts

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  11. Beautiful picture and lovely set of haiku Grace!:)

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  12. The sunset view is great from here. (Aside: Actually we've had dreadful weather all week in the UK. Raining nonstop, grey skies. This morning is no exception). Have a lovely weekend, Grace.

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  13. I want to be on that place! Lovely haiku!

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  14. Picture set the tone for your haiku beautifully!

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  15. ur haiku are much above my level..:) i cant help but wonder how you do it! :)

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  16. Very serene haiku, love the image. Together with the haiku it makes a wonderful haiga.

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  17. an excellent set Grace...3rd one was WOW... :)

    PS: for me its the best set by you... :)

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  18. thoughtful
    serene
    mindfully present.

    all qualities i treasure.

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  19. Vivid scenes that led to clarity.

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  20. I like the third part! I liked them all, but the third part really spoke to me.

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  21. Very nice. Well written.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  22. There are some exquisite lines in these haiku. Really nice.

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