Thursday, April 26, 2012

Temptation



beautiful petals
blooming bright as golden sun, 
i linger to hold

~0~0

field of sunflowers
waving banners and drum beats, 
i linger to dance

~0~0

the back of her knees,
creamy as white magnolias,
i linger to touch 



Posted for Haiku Heights:   Temptation


This is part of the National Writing Poetry Month


Picture credit:   here

23 comments:

  1. So lovely = these haiku. Especially for a romantic like myself. Thank you.

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  2. I like...'lingering to touch'.

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  3. love! and the picture is nice too!!

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  4. A lot of lingering going on, I hope you aren't in a no loitering zone..haha..nice one!

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  5. lovely haiku ~ very sensual ~ awesome photo ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Lovely! I love sunflowers :)

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  7. oh this got hotter the further you went...smiles...i like all the flowers though...

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  8. haha pat...no loitering zone...smiles.

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  9. Nice take on temptations!,love HH!!

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  10. These are temptations no one should resist!!! ;) Beautiful Grace..


    Rosy lips of temptation - A Haiku

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  11. temptation wrapped up in softness...lovely Grace!

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  12. wish someone would touch the back of my knees and go north :))))
    This was very sensual, sister!

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  13. Lovely - all three of them. The way you use "linger" to hint at temptation is marvelous.

    Richard

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  14. I love the repetition of "linger." It was all very Grace-ful.

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  15. Beautiful set...Even I linger to hold, dance and touch...beautiful examples taken for the prompt :)
    Temptation

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  16. These three haiku are really a temptation. Lovely imagery and an awesome sunflower picture.

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  17. Lovely depiction of temptation! Since it is your dancing weekend ... Enjoy!!

    Happy Friday ~ Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration

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  18. Simply beautifull..very interesting..

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  19. beautifully expressed.

    I love your avatar image btw!!!

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  20. lovely set of Haiku...2nd one was WOW for me... :)

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