enamoured:
yellow bee tangled in her
flowered-pink skirt
~0~0~
pink petals
falling one by one,
i come unhinged -
~0~0~
broken, her words flew
across mud-stained walls - still
softest blooms
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
and Haiku Heights: Free - Joining you for the last day of September Challenge ~
Well written :-)
ReplyDeleteEach tristich contains a gentle thought and some sadness. They are the perfect accompaniment to the picture.
ReplyDeleteLove the second!!! Yes, quite unhinged...that is how nature makes me feel too, Grace! Lovely haiku!! :)
ReplyDeleteI love the theme of flowers as the snow is growing roots.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed them all!
~rick
I enjoyed the first one most.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the second one very much. :-)
ReplyDeleteLoved the first one A LOT! The rest were good too - really nice interpretation of the prompt
ReplyDeleteSo delicate! I love two and three the most.
ReplyDeleteUnhinged can be fun of course a bit dangerous too haha
ReplyDeleteYour second is my favourite as I, too, have come "unhinged" at times :-) All are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ellecee "unhinged" is a great word . . . and so visual. I also love the first. I also loved the first.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful triplet Grace ... thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful metaphoric take.I really like the second one.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love all these, Grace, but especially the first. I too have gotten tangled in an unwise relationship. Thank you for all your kind words and good wishes. I'm happy to know I'll see you again around the "bloghood."
ReplyDeleteNice textural contrasts. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGreat words, especially the first.
ReplyDeleteIn certain instances (to me) it's feels so good to 'come unhinged' - Free!
ReplyDeleteI like the first two especially. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteLovely set/poem. I especially enjoyed the first one! Thank you for your encouraging words all month. I have enjoyed your poetry too.
ReplyDeleteoooh the first one is perfect.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set Grace...I loved the first one the most....I would love to wear such skirt! <3
ReplyDeletePeace in prison
Gorgeous! The first is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteA delicately painted trio.
ReplyDeleteWhy didn't I leave a note the first time I visited? These are no longer first impressions: I love the bee in the skirt--the same one tangled with one of mine! Fickle! No wonder the petals fall, unhinging the emotions one by one. And then, of course, one might call that broken, the walls are shaken and broken, but words, they say, cannot hurt like sticks ad stones. I am not so sure. Fun but sad images to play with. I chose the same picture.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful trio, being the first haiku my favourite, especially these words: tangled in her
ReplyDeleteflowered-pink skirt
By the way, just yesterday I was taking a photo of a bee in one of our hibiscus, exactly same colour as the ones in your pic.
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Lovely. I particularly like the first two.
ReplyDeleteRichard
You always write such beautiful haiku. The last one is my favorite, but each one is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteComing unhinged is a quirky sort of freedom! :)
ReplyDeleteSeed-Free Pod
I love unhinged....you do have a great knack for this type of poetry and always leave me a little breathless. Great job.
ReplyDeletevery well written.. :)
ReplyDeleteWas under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge ...
Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS...being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull's eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world...Loads of special thanks to each one of you...September had been very exciting and a learning month for me...I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure ...Thanks a lot once again...keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly...
All three are nice, but I just had to smile at the image created by the first one.
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