Photography Credit: Reena of Missing Moments
moon-lit night,
dazzling symphony
of light and shadows
~0~0~
concert park
echoed the soulful strings,
echoed the soulful strings,
the moon wept
~0~0~
she adores the sun
swaying yellow petals in wind,
the blue moon
~0~0~
she adores the sun
swaying yellow petals in wind,
the blue moon
Posted for Haiku Heights: Moon - This is part of the September Challenge in HH ~
Awesome poetry ... loved the image you carved with your words !!!
ReplyDeleteI think I like the first one best, although the second one is also good. I like the repeated moon in all three, but I still don't understand the last one.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comments and visit Matthew ~
Deletesometimes my haiku are not related to each other; the last one refers to sunflowers, a contrast to moonflowers ~
"the moon wept" indeed! I liked the last one as a stand alone. I tried but could not get my moonflower haiku to work.
ReplyDeleteVery nice I like the last one best but there all good
ReplyDeletenice...the imagery in that last one is great...love a good outdoor concert as well so the second was fun for me...and to think on the moon being moved....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku. They're all lovely, but the third one I love the most. Well done.
ReplyDeletethe moon wept.. so serene
ReplyDeleteYou paint lovely pictures with these haiku. My favourite is the second one with "the moon wept".
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, each one. And, I love the reference to the sunflowers being loved by the blue moon :)
ReplyDeleteThe concert park was a nice touch and certainly not once in a blue moon at your place haha
ReplyDeleteI loved all of these, but especially the second. I could just imagine music that would make the moon weep. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove that third verse!
ReplyDelete"Grace" ful and amazing set of haikus :)
ReplyDeleteNice! and the moon look awesome Grace:)
ReplyDeleteVery fine! I love that the moon is moved to weep by the music, that moon loves the sun.
ReplyDeletedazzling symphony and moon wept are powerful lines for me! :)
ReplyDeleteVery delightful set....Second one was brilliant!
ReplyDeleteEvocative. Really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteHi, Grace, I haven't been over here for a long time :-) I'm glad to be back with your graceful haiku!
ReplyDeleteI love "the moon wept" and that "she adores the sun" Sad and beautiful.
Best, MK
Wonderful write,Grace! How the moon had inspired mankind through time! Your verse says it all!
ReplyDeleteHank
Oh I love moonlit nights! You painted very lovely images. I enjoyed them all.
ReplyDeleteThe symphony you describe is one that I never tire of. I can "listen" to it again and again.
ReplyDeletePursuing the Moon
real lovely haiku, my best is the second one. powerful imagery of the moon weeping. Good shot! Mine is here: http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com/2012/09/04/haiku-heights-prompt-moon/
ReplyDeleteI love the music references in the first two haiku. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI agree with RP. That second one just blew me away. Beautiful thoughts in haiku..!
ReplyDeleteThat last stanza is great! Yellow petals for a blue moon.
ReplyDeleteRick
All beautiful! Loved the last one the most.
ReplyDeleteOh, so lovely -- every word!
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