@Laurie
with white ducks and grey feathers,
summer's last picnic
~0~0
the lake scattered
red, orange and yellow blooms,
stripped of ink: pale leaf
~0~0~
soft feathers,
lining nest of twigs,
red-scarred breast
Note on last haiku: When constructing her nest, a hen will line it with soft down feathers she plucks from her own breast. This gives the eggs the best possible cushioning and insulation.
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
and Haiku Heights: Color
So many colors here ... wonderful :-)
ReplyDeleteYa know, grace, you have the best weekends!
ReplyDeleteAnd your soft poems of them are a joy to read.
Rick
You're the Queen of Haiku anyday Grace! Reading you is just such a delight for me! I wonder when i ll be able to write like you do! Beautiful.. you amaze me each and every time!!!
ReplyDeleteGod power vibrates within!
Well, yet another colourful treat..Grace.. Thanks.. RS:)
ReplyDeletelovely, especially the one about the hen. I can see her.
ReplyDeleteAll are wonderful, but I just love the first one, Grace! Hope you have a great weekend.
ReplyDeleteWonderful. I especially loved the last one.
ReplyDeleteI love how all the colours work together in these haiku.
ReplyDeleteI love the picture and the haiku:) love thecolors!
ReplyDeleteisnt amazing how are beauty in.many parts?
nice....when we live in MD we had a pond we would go to where there were so many ducks...we had to stand on a table to feed them before they over ran us....smiles....have a wonderful weekend grace...
ReplyDeleteColourful images of Nature in action! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI like the thought that's gone into the last one, but the first would be my favourite - it creates an image an mood (of a time of year and place) very effectively I think. Should "of" be "with" though?
ReplyDeleteLooks like they are having a grand time and you captured it indeed. Have a great long weekend too!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku. The first one is my favourite but all are lovely to read.
ReplyDeleteWonderful composed set of haiku. I am glad to read a haiku of you again Grace.
ReplyDeleteOh, Grace!! You KNOW that last one with the detail on her feathers gets me!! That is SO touching. Well done on them all!!
ReplyDelete"summer's last picnic"
ReplyDeleteThere's always a twinge of sadness accompanying that repast...
The Color of Fire
It is a picnic indeed with the softness all around, and the last one as autumn readies herself and the birds prepare for the future. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, all very nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku, Grace. YOU are a master of the haiku form.
ReplyDeleteA lovely look at some of the colors along the way. I enjoy haiku.
ReplyDeleteColorful indeed. =)
ReplyDeleteAmazingly beautiful...and actually the reader's delight..so many colors..Wow!!
ReplyDeleteI see beautiful colours filled with life through your haiku
ReplyDeletewonderfully crafted :)
A very interesting information on your last haiku. Thanks for sharing. Lovely to read you again, Grace.
ReplyDeletevery nice really liking it
ReplyDeleteI love this. What a wonderful thing the mother hen does.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Grace. The last was so poignant. Now that's mother's love.
ReplyDeleteThe last one is my favorite -- especially after reading the notation. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletepretty :)
ReplyDeleteLove it Grace! Instinct is a powerful tool!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love your haiku, Grace.
ReplyDeleteHank is right, instinct is a powerful tool indeed, as the plucked breast-feathers show.
K
Beautiful haiku...so much to love in them.
ReplyDeleteI too chose the picture of the geese. I do love seeing them on their nests with tiny goslings tucked about.
ReplyDeleteback here after a long gap.. Wonderful colors!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special