Monday, September 24, 2012

Sleep



your words like
warm chocolate cup,
evening lullaby

~0~0~

your lips tasting of cinnamon,
turns me into a
restless tide

 
~0~0~

folding wings,
you nestle close to me -
black butterfly




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33 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 24, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    Wow ... so romantic :-)

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 24, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    I loved Black Butterfly..Lovely Haiku all Grace..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/no-sleep-in-her-eyes.html

    RS:)

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  3. UnknownSeptember 24, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    How perfectly romantic. I really liked the words like chocolate.

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  4. Pat HattSeptember 24, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    Such a sensual run, as you boil the cup and then some.

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  5. Far Beyond The RidgeSeptember 24, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    A nice warm poem for a chilly autumn morn.
    Thanks
    ~rick

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2012 at 4:35 PM

    Love the combination and contrast here, with a natural progression too. A busy night!

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  7. Brian MillerSeptember 24, 2012 at 5:51 PM

    nice...love the chocolate and cinnamon...and the butterfly...lots of subtle intimacy in this one grace....

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  8. SusanSeptember 24, 2012 at 6:16 PM

    wow. sweet sleep.

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 24, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Awesome ... sweet dreams ... very well written triplet of haiku.

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  10. Susan DanielsSeptember 24, 2012 at 7:47 PM

    Grace--you caught sleep here so elegantly. Loved these.

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  11. kaykualaSeptember 24, 2012 at 7:51 PM

    Sensuously real! You made sleep to be a luxury! Nicely Grace!

    Hank

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  12. BarbaraSeptember 24, 2012 at 8:33 PM

    Love this set! And especially the images of hot chocolate before bed! Lovely.

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  13. MarySeptember 24, 2012 at 8:50 PM

    Oh wow, soft and sensual.

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  14. knot2shareSeptember 24, 2012 at 9:02 PM

    So beautiful, Grace! Right now the warm cup of hot chocolate is so inviting!

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  15. ElleceeSeptember 24, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    Love the black butterfly :-)

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  16. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerSeptember 24, 2012 at 9:51 PM

    Love these Grace--beautifully done---

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  17. HazelSeptember 24, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    I'd love a cup of chocolate for a lullaby. Lovely lines; I enjoyed them all.

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  18. PattiKenSeptember 24, 2012 at 9:58 PM

    Oh, delicious passion. Sleep will have to wait!

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  19. awalkinmyheartSeptember 24, 2012 at 10:05 PM

    A prelude to a lovely evening and a peaceful sleep, I believe!

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  20. Sri ValliSeptember 24, 2012 at 11:32 PM

    Lovely haiku set...First one...My favorite!

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  21. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:14 AM

    You had me at CHOCOLATE!

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  22. odyzzSeptember 25, 2012 at 3:28 AM

    I am in love with the warm chocolate cup... nice set of haiku

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  23. PranitaSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:36 AM

    Such diverse takes on a single prompt!!! Lovely!


    Building Lego Dreams!

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  24. SusanSeptember 25, 2012 at 7:11 AM

    chocolate: lullaby; cinnamon: tide; and wings: butterfly. Safety, affection, Sleep!!!

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  25. Reading PleasureSeptember 25, 2012 at 7:50 AM

    Perfectly written.

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  26. JollySeptember 25, 2012 at 8:32 AM

    Romantic, soft, sensuous, spicy, you've captured so many nuances in a few lines.

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  27. SayantiniSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:57 AM

    Very sweet:)

    ~Sayantini Bhattacharya
    http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in

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  28. DulcinaSeptember 25, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    Wowww... delicious haiku with the sweet touch of chocolate.
    :)

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  29. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 25, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    SO beautiful, especially the folded winged black butterfly......lovely.

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  30. UnknownSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:45 PM

    Very well written!

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  31. DulceSeptember 26, 2012 at 4:48 PM

    fel like having one of those...

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  32. TeresaSeptember 27, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    Perfectly romantic and sensual.

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  33. Anu ~*~September 28, 2012 at 12:33 PM

    Oh .Lovely ..i liked it ..

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