her laughter
like black whole pepper,
crinkled over bowl of noodles
~0~0~0
his lecture
woke up the sleepy audience,
slice of orange zest
~0~0~0
spicy sauce
dotted the conversation,
as a lace strap falls
picture credit: here
haha that last one is a bit naughty i think...smiles...the first is a really cool way to use pepper...it works...
ReplyDeleteA brilliant set of haiku.
ReplyDeleteWonderful composed series Grace. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThese are good. I really like the peppery spice in the last one. The first made me hungry(the picture looks like Vietnamese pho).
ReplyDeleteYes it is ~ Thanks for the visit ~
DeleteThe last one woke me up (I've just been out for a meal) and was a leap from the first two! I think the imagery in the first is the strongest.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this prompt, and all your visits to my blog. You have kept me enthused!
Terrific threesome, Grace! I think I love the third one best!
ReplyDeleteOh what some seasoning can do to those that catch them in their view and up their nose curling up their toes, in a good way haha
ReplyDeleteLoved all three of these. My favorite is the one about the lecture awakening the sleep audience. (He must have been good! Smiles)
ReplyDeleteAll three haiku are a delight to read but the third haiku has a naughty surprise!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE that last one!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your haiku set today. The last one is my favourite,
ReplyDeleteI like lectures that keep me awake. Nice set. I love the third one.
ReplyDelete...spicy;)
ReplyDeletespicy set of haiku..nice . :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your visits to my blog and sharing your thoughts..
Wow! loved all three!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written ... the last one indeed is spicy ;-)
ReplyDeleteLaughter like pepper! I see it, I've heard it!
ReplyDeleteOrange zest! so necessary to listening
spicy sauce! I can see how this kind of conversation could lead to the lace falling.
Most original and delightful, Grace.
A nice set of three, with a bit of fun in the last one.
ReplyDeleteYum for that photo :) and a LOL for the last. ;) Loved all three, Grace.
ReplyDeleteloved the last one ;)
ReplyDeleteinteresting use of pepper in all three haikus !
First one is my favorite! A very good prompt suggestion... liked it :)
ReplyDeleteFantastic Imagery. I love it.
ReplyDeleteI like that first one especially!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely...especially the last.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing,
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
I've heard very few peppery lecturers, and many more of the other variety!
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I always enjoy your haikus. I especially enjoy the first section with the black whole pepper imagery. BTW, that photo makes me hungry.
ReplyDeleteLovely set
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