Monday, September 3, 2012

Moon

Photography Credit:   Reena of Missing Moments


moon-lit night,
dazzling symphony
of light and shadows  

~0~0~ 

concert park 
echoed the soulful strings,   
the moon wept

~0~0~


she adores the sun
swaying yellow petals in wind,  
the blue moon


Posted for Haiku Heights:  Moon - This is part of the September Challenge in HH ~

30 comments:

  1. Awesome poetry ... loved the image you carved with your words !!!

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  2. I think I like the first one best, although the second one is also good. I like the repeated moon in all three, but I still don't understand the last one.

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    1. thanks for the comments and visit Matthew ~

      sometimes my haiku are not related to each other; the last one refers to sunflowers, a contrast to moonflowers ~

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  3. "the moon wept" indeed! I liked the last one as a stand alone. I tried but could not get my moonflower haiku to work.

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  4. Very nice I like the last one best but there all good

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  5. nice...the imagery in that last one is great...love a good outdoor concert as well so the second was fun for me...and to think on the moon being moved....

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  6. Beautiful set of haiku. They're all lovely, but the third one I love the most. Well done.

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  7. You paint lovely pictures with these haiku. My favourite is the second one with "the moon wept".

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  8. Beautiful, each one. And, I love the reference to the sunflowers being loved by the blue moon :)

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  9. The concert park was a nice touch and certainly not once in a blue moon at your place haha

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  10. I loved all of these, but especially the second. I could just imagine music that would make the moon weep. Beautiful.

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  11. "Grace" ful and amazing set of haikus :)

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  12. I like how you personified the moon with human feelings: she wept ... she adores the sun, lovely :)

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  13. Nice! and the moon look awesome Grace:)

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  14. Very fine! I love that the moon is moved to weep by the music, that moon loves the sun.

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  15. dazzling symphony and moon wept are powerful lines for me! :)

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  16. Very delightful set....Second one was brilliant!

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  17. Hi, Grace, I haven't been over here for a long time :-) I'm glad to be back with your graceful haiku!
    I love "the moon wept" and that "she adores the sun" Sad and beautiful.
    Best, MK

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  18. Wonderful write,Grace! How the moon had inspired mankind through time! Your verse says it all!

    Hank

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  19. Oh I love moonlit nights! You painted very lovely images. I enjoyed them all.

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  20. The symphony you describe is one that I never tire of. I can "listen" to it again and again.

    Pursuing the Moon


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  21. real lovely haiku, my best is the second one. powerful imagery of the moon weeping. Good shot! Mine is here: http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com/2012/09/04/haiku-heights-prompt-moon/

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  22. I love the music references in the first two haiku. Beautiful!

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  23. I agree with RP. That second one just blew me away. Beautiful thoughts in haiku..!

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  24. That last stanza is great! Yellow petals for a blue moon.
    Rick

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  25. All beautiful! Loved the last one the most.

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