i wake up in the morning waiting for the sun
to soften me, soft as linen, softer as mud pie
my fingertips are tapping, checking the blue sketch
of canvas, granite silver stones, the studs, the slow motion
of time, rocking me to stupor, here in my pink dress, white
socks, shoes off, floating, i twist my body to bend
into the hourglass of sweet complicity & simplicity
but this solid bed of recycled plastic is hard, my thoughts
run grey, spiral to crawl, crash, cramp__
i cannot move to lift myself off this loneliness, this rabbit hole_
tell me you care, tell me to touch green grass,
tell me to get off the phone & social media,
this body swells of longing for rain, soil & seeds,
sounds of birdsongs, the smell of pine trees
i want to drown in my dreams of clouds, as the sun
softens me, soft as linen, softer as mud pie, sinking to earth
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - We are writing Ekphrastic Poetry based on the 3 artwork selected in the prompt. Join us when the pub doors open at 3pm EST. Thanks for the visits and comments.
What a lovely interpretation of the Berrio painting, Grace, and you’ve captured its muted tones in your words, particularly in ‘soft as linen’, ‘blue sketch of canvas’ and the pink dress. I like the change of mood, which turns on the lines:
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run grey, spiral to crawl, crash, cramp’.
" i twist my body to bend into the hourglass of sweet complicity & simplicity but this solid bed of recycled plastic is hard," .. sigh .. this is such a deeply poignant write, Grace 💖💖
ReplyDeleteAn amazing piece, bringing in details of the painting all the while taking me to a place of rest, reflection and appreciation for the real world. I love the plea of " tell me you care, tell me to touch green grass,
ReplyDelete/tell me to get off the phone & social media", (putting a modern spin on the image) and the gorgeous phrases that frame the poem.
I also enjoy the modern spin you’ve put along with the dreamlike quality of her art. Important messages to remember the natural world and be considerate.👏🏻 Interestingly, I am reading a book about the epidemic of plastic pollution.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, Grace. Captures the mood of longing and stillness and dreaminess of the artwork.
ReplyDeleteThis is so poignant to daydreams
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much💜love
You have portrayed a woman who has become a slave to modern day technology and its trappings. She craves the peace of nature and finding comfort in the grass. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteYou have portrayed a woman who has become a slave to modern day technology and its trappings. She craves the peace of nature and finding comfort in the grass. Lovely!
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Very well done, Grace. I hope this is not autobiographical! :>)
ReplyDeleteSuch a dreamy and contemplative take on the image, a deep sense of longing for the full-senses touch of nature in the midst of modern digital life.
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully written, Grace, beautiful, but with sadness. The swaying rhythm and sounds combined with the loneliness this person feels.
ReplyDeleteThis is a gorgeous painting you chose to write to and I can imagine this person thinking such things as they lay there.
ReplyDeletei want to drown in my dreams of clouds, as the sun
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Great close Grace! We wrote fairly on the same theme seemingly some unguarded moments of sadness!
Hank
Another woman torn so many ways she just wants to lie down and let it all wash over her. Full of pastel tones and silences.
ReplyDeleteFirst reaction was how incredibly 'rich' in tone this is! I love these words 'the hourglass of sweet complicity & simplicity' before you sink into the 'solid hardness.' Thank you for an amazing challenge.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your nuanced interpretation of Berrio's artwork...beautifully complementary! Thanks for an interesting prompt, Grace!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful interpretation. Soft as linen your words in bringing this image to life.
ReplyDeleteSo much not was I was expecting - the painting reminded me of Ophelia but your interpretation was lyrical but thoroughly modern...
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