We chatter to sangrias and songs
In Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays
Look up, there's a full moon beckoning-
A blue moon, silk & serene, round-eyed
Silver light, its wholeness lifting us
To gaze beyond trees, city lights, cars
Blue moon, give us the longing for stars
Map our hands with sage & bay leaves
We are soft as ocean, flowing into you
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This is a lovely poem, that makes me wish for the moon (and my sage withered alas)
ReplyDeleteA beautiful, serene poem. I can hear the ocean, laughter and music beneath that blue moon.
ReplyDeleteThese are beautiful moon spells, Grace. I especially love the sibilant ‘silk & serene, round-eyed silver light’ and ‘We are soft as ocean, flowing into you’.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Grace! Cheering "to yesterdays" then the serenity of the final lines. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLove how the moon lifts us to gaze beyond trees, city lights, and cars.
ReplyDeleteAll of us and the moon one. Great thought. Thanks
ReplyDeletehere's to yesterdys by the ocean
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem. I loved the line map our hands with sage and bay leaves and the ending flows so well. :)
ReplyDeleteThs is gorgeous, Grace. I especially love the vintage tees and these:
ReplyDelete"Blue moon, give us the longing for stars"
"We are soft as ocean, flowing into you"
I enjoyed this very much, Grace.
ReplyDeleteA perfect poem to honor the full blue moon. The opening line was my favorite ~ Truedessa
ReplyDeleteIn Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays...
ReplyDeleteThis is a great description of those of us who are getting older!
Just beautiful Grace. π✌πΌπ«ΆπΌ
ReplyDeleteI love this evocation of old friends gathering Grace
ReplyDelete"We chatter to sangrias and songs
In Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays"
Blue magic here Grace, dancing with starlight.
ReplyDeleteMoonlight softens everything, even people.
ReplyDeleteOh this is so lovely and calming. Beautiful word painting
ReplyDeleteI love "map our hands with sage and bay leaves". Another great moon poem.
ReplyDelete"We chatter to sangrias and songs
ReplyDeleteIn Vintage tees"
Love that sets the scene for a lovely feelgood (and we need that) poem.
A blue moon, silk & serene, round-eyed
ReplyDeleteSilver light, its wholeness lifting us
To gaze beyond trees, city lights, cars
How wonderful, Grace! A blue moon can transform ordinary guys to be more alive to gaze beyond. Love your poem Ma'am!
Hank
You bewitch us with this poem! Love that perfect fluid last line.
ReplyDelete"We are soft as ocean, flowing into you"
Thanks for your commitment to helping others learn
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