Thursday, August 31, 2023

moon spells


We chatter to sangrias and songs

In Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays

Look up, there's a full moon beckoning-


A blue moon, silk & serene, round-eyed

Silver light, its wholeness lifting us

To gaze beyond trees, city lights, cars


Blue moon, give us the longing for stars

Map our hands with sage & bay leaves 

We are soft as ocean, flowing into you




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22 comments:

  1. This is a lovely poem, that makes me wish for the moon (and my sage withered alas)

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  2. A beautiful, serene poem. I can hear the ocean, laughter and music beneath that blue moon.

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  3. These are beautiful moon spells, Grace. I especially love the sibilant ‘silk & serene, round-eyed silver light’ and ‘We are soft as ocean, flowing into you’.

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  4. Lovely, Grace! Cheering "to yesterdays" then the serenity of the final lines. Beautiful!

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  5. Love how the moon lifts us to gaze beyond trees, city lights, and cars.

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  6. All of us and the moon one. Great thought. Thanks

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  7. Such a lovely poem. I loved the line map our hands with sage and bay leaves and the ending flows so well. :)

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  8. Ths is gorgeous, Grace. I especially love the vintage tees and these:

    "Blue moon, give us the longing for stars"

    "We are soft as ocean, flowing into you"

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  9. A perfect poem to honor the full blue moon. The opening line was my favorite ~ Truedessa

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  10. In Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays...

    This is a great description of those of us who are getting older!

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  11. Just beautiful Grace. πŸ™‚✌🏼🫢🏼

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  12. I love this evocation of old friends gathering Grace
    "We chatter to sangrias and songs
    In Vintage tees, we cheer to yesterdays"

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  13. Blue magic here Grace, dancing with starlight.

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  14. Moonlight softens everything, even people.

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  15. Oh this is so lovely and calming. Beautiful word painting

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  16. I love "map our hands with sage and bay leaves". Another great moon poem.

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  17. "We chatter to sangrias and songs

    In Vintage tees"
    Love that sets the scene for a lovely feelgood (and we need that) poem.

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  18. A blue moon, silk & serene, round-eyed
    Silver light, its wholeness lifting us
    To gaze beyond trees, city lights, cars

    How wonderful, Grace! A blue moon can transform ordinary guys to be more alive to gaze beyond. Love your poem Ma'am!

    Hank

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  19. You bewitch us with this poem! Love that perfect fluid last line.

    "We are soft as ocean, flowing into you"

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  20. Thanks for your commitment to helping others learn

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