Wrinkled black maple leaves fall on the ground
Green crab apples dot the fruit trees (again)
Orange sun dips and dims ever slowly, a clock
unwinds, music when soft voices die-
The season in transition begins -
a limerence - short-lived- with nature
Joy in all its exuberance as rain
pouring down, refreshing as cold ice on hot day
Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books
remind me that birds will soon fly south of the border
I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs
& sweetness of child's laughter in the park
The smell of smoke from grilled meats
lingers, as well as the crisp evening air that drapes the sky
With autumn grey. With a coat, I sip warm chocolate,
inhaling the last of summer blooms & harvest of fruits
Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory—
–Percy Bysshe Shelley, Music when soft voices die (Note/Credit to the poet)
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - August Transitions, hosted by Merril D. Smith. Join us when the pub doors open at 3pm EST.
Oh Grace, I love this write of yours. You've captured the transition between summer and autumn so well with your imagery: from smells, to sounds, to visuals. I especially like these words:
ReplyDelete"Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books"
. . . but of course that's because they're so true for me!
You describe this time so well.... and I know what is going to happen, still I hope that just a little while summer will stay.
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful late summer poem, Grace! The colours make it even more vivid and I love the idea of a clock unwinding. I also spotted your use of the word ‘limerence’! My favourite lines:
ReplyDelete‘Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books
remind me that birds will soon fly south of the border’
and
‘I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs
& sweetness of child's laughter in the park’ – oh yes please!
Poignantly touching Grace and the bottling of birdsong, laughter etc makes the transience felt even more
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful! This may be my new favorite of yours, Grace. You capture the wistfulness of this end of summer period. No need for coats here yet, but it's coming. I love this one!
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely lovely, Grace! I especially admire; "I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs & sweetness of child's laughter in the park." ❤️❤️
ReplyDeletethe line about last summer blooms and harvest of fruits is my favourite line
ReplyDeleteWell Done!!
ReplyDeleteBoy, I'll take your late summer in a heartbeat over the flat heat pancake stuck to Florida these days. No room for "limerence" here, but it blossoms throughout your poem. So lovely.
ReplyDeleteA lovely dose of transition. My favourite line "Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books"
ReplyDeleteMuchđź’–love
This is indeed a time of looking, both forward and back.
ReplyDeleteThe end of Summer and beginning of Fall is always a welcome event for me. I love your descriptions of summer transitions. This I liked...
ReplyDeleteJoy in all its exuberance as rain
pouring down, refreshing as cold ice on hot day
I love the lines:
ReplyDeleteWilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books
remind me that birds will soon fly south of the borde
I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs
nailed the prompt lyrically...
Such a lovely thought to bottle up all the beauty of summer. You and I can definitely relate to the way the seasons pass so quickly. I love the way you savoured the season in this poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThe first fungus-blighted leaves of August...good one, seldom used, nice ambiguity!
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