Tuesday, August 15, 2023

Late summer

Wrinkled black maple leaves fall on the ground

Green crab apples dot the fruit trees (again)


Orange sun dips and dims ever slowly, a clock

unwinds, music when soft voices die-


The season in transition begins -

a limerence - short-lived- with nature


Joy in all its exuberance as rain

pouring down, refreshing as cold ice on hot day


Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books

remind me that birds will soon fly south of the border


I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs

& sweetness of child's laughter in the park


The smell of smoke from grilled meats

lingers, as well as the crisp evening air that drapes the sky


With autumn grey.    With a coat, I sip warm chocolate, 

inhaling the last of summer blooms & harvest of fruits



Music, when soft voices die,

Vibrates in the memory—

–Percy Bysshe Shelley, Music when soft voices die (Note/Credit to the poet)


Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - August Transitions, hosted by Merril D. Smith.  Join us when the pub doors open at 3pm EST.


17 comments:

  1. Oh Grace, I love this write of yours. You've captured the transition between summer and autumn so well with your imagery: from smells, to sounds, to visuals. I especially like these words:
    "Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books"
    . . . but of course that's because they're so true for me!

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  2. You describe this time so well.... and I know what is going to happen, still I hope that just a little while summer will stay.

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  3. What a delightful late summer poem, Grace! The colours make it even more vivid and I love the idea of a clock unwinding. I also spotted your use of the word ‘limerence’! My favourite lines:
    ‘Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books
    remind me that birds will soon fly south of the border’
    and
    ‘I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs
    & sweetness of child's laughter in the park’ – oh yes please!

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  4. Poignantly touching Grace and the bottling of birdsong, laughter etc makes the transience felt even more

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  5. So beautiful! This may be my new favorite of yours, Grace. You capture the wistfulness of this end of summer period. No need for coats here yet, but it's coming. I love this one!

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  6. This is absolutely lovely, Grace! I especially admire; "I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs & sweetness of child's laughter in the park." ❤️❤️

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  7. the line about last summer blooms and harvest of fruits is my favourite line

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  8. Boy, I'll take your late summer in a heartbeat over the flat heat pancake stuck to Florida these days. No room for "limerence" here, but it blossoms throughout your poem. So lovely.

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  9. A lovely dose of transition. My favourite line "Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books"

    Muchđź’–love

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  10. This is indeed a time of looking, both forward and back.

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  11. The end of Summer and beginning of Fall is always a welcome event for me. I love your descriptions of summer transitions. This I liked...
    Joy in all its exuberance as rain
    pouring down, refreshing as cold ice on hot day

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  12. I love the lines:
    Wilting petals, incomplete poems & unopened books
    remind me that birds will soon fly south of the borde
    I'll bottle up this music of birdsongs
    nailed the prompt lyrically...

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  13. Such a lovely thought to bottle up all the beauty of summer. You and I can definitely relate to the way the seasons pass so quickly. I love the way you savoured the season in this poem.

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  14. The first fungus-blighted leaves of August...good one, seldom used, nice ambiguity!

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