Puddle, 1952, M. C. Escher
There is a silent forest beneath
my road, soft with water, hard with oil
Peering to see the full moon
shining at the edge, halfway across the sea
You waited for me to cross the sky,
with your lantern eyes and wrinkled hands
Glancing back, your words carried me
when my legs were puddle frail in the storm
your gnarled limbs and deep roots reach
for me, and lifts me high from brown soil
You are the tree that carries me, still
in my journey of many roads, many seasons
now as your leaves fall slowly like gentle rain,
i carry the seeds of your forest in my hands
always
Happy Father's Day !!!
Posted for: The Mag
I love nature poetry! I write a lot of it myself.So far I do believe this is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful metaphor!
ReplyDeleteLovely, and the image too.
ReplyDeleteEnchanting. Such beautiful thoughts.
ReplyDeleteYou waited for me to cross the sky,
ReplyDeletewith your lantern eyes and wrinkled hands
Two lines which hold magic...
this is wonderful- especially the last two lines. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful tribute to your father this is.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day Grace.
What Jinksy and Kathe said, punctuated by the "always". Profoundly beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, Grace.
ReplyDeletethis is lovely...you are the tree that carried me...i def feel the father within your words as well....the strength of limbs and roots....very nice grace...happy fathers day to all the dads in your life...
ReplyDeleteI love how you saw the tree reflected in the oily water ... the tree a symbol of strength ~ the never-ending strength of a father daughter bond.
ReplyDeleteA lovely tribute for Father's Day!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous! Happy Father's Day!
ReplyDeleteExtraordinarily uplifting. Well done.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully evocative...I love "lantern eyes"...
ReplyDeleteThis is just beautiful, Grace. A lovely poem to write/ share on Father's Day.
ReplyDeleteCarried through and far, can surely see the father in that!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem for Father's Day!
ReplyDeleteWow, a truly awesome metaphor to use to construct a poem for this day. Such strength, and love.
ReplyDeleteWonderful work, Grace.
Trees are ever so wise! and timeless- thanks.
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines indeed sums it all up. Nice comparison. :)
ReplyDeleteThere's a touch of Ezra Pound here. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and what a perfect poem for Father's Day.
ReplyDeletethis is so lovely Ms.Grace and I love the deeper message at the last line..visiting you ;)
ReplyDeleteso sweetly written...loved it...GOD bless u... :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Lovely. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis is.... Amazing. Loved it, love the always.
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