she is light as feather
on the train, we're matching sweaters
but in my office, we're opposites
as i pour over my sheets
she is leaning out of glass window
steeled by balconies, her flamingo
skin quivering among boxed flowers & fake grapes-
her eyes far away, smitten with the lake-
there are city pigeons & gulls
feeding near the trash bins, but her pulse
is untutored rhyme so she stays away
from gossips around the water cooler-
her sighs are blighted poetry
scribbled hurriedly on paper napkins
she leads a secret life,
craving for sweet berries & a slice
of honeycomb or mushrooms-
her screams are echoes
of raindrops until
every evening, i return home
where i preen her wings
and we dance and swing
to wild song of the wind
to hoots of night creatures
until finally
my chord hits a nightingale's note
she's a songstress in velveteen-
Posted for dVerse poets Pub- Hosted by Kim Russell. Inspired by the poem, The Heavy Bear who Walks with Me. The challenge is to write a poem, of any length or form, about an animal in a human way or a human in an animal way, highlighting some trait of the animal/human that either sets us apart or brings us together – it’s up to you, just as long as the poem is new.
I liked the evening's dancing to the wild song of the wind.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful bird to have besides you... it's like a secret friend that are there to comfort...
ReplyDeleteI love the caring of this secret friend.
ReplyDeleteWatching over and reaching that point, sure a comfort at any joint.
ReplyDelete'her screams are echoes
ReplyDeleteof raindrops ...' - she sounds divine!
I love the bird as the free spirit who never leaves you - a beautiful write Grace xxx
ReplyDeleteA beautiful write indeed. Pure poetry of a secret friend, written with love.
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You leave some room for several scenarios & I like that; from imaginary bird to a stuffed one, a real one who waits, but her spirit is so strong, she seems to be with you all day. I see a parrot.
ReplyDeleteI read it that she is your alter-ego. The you who has to deal with spreadsheets and the you who longs to fly. I've been there. This is just seeping beauty, Grace.
ReplyDelete"her pulse / is untutored rhyme...
ReplyDeleteher sighs are blighted poetry / scribbled hurriedly on paper napkins" As I read this, I thought 'I know this person. Many of these people!' You wrote it that well.
Birds are the sweetest creatures, aren’t they? I loved these lines:
ReplyDelete"her sighs are blighted poetry
scribbled hurriedly on paper napkins"
A lovely secret friend, Grace. I share her passion for berries and slices of honeycomb. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this. I love how you swing between human and bird experiences, and the way they echo each other. It's very skillful.
ReplyDeleteYour spirit (animal) is beautiful. The climax was stirring: "my chord hits a nightingale's note" Sing it, sister.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery and feel to this poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the parallelism of you and the free bird. Wonderfully done!
ReplyDeleteI like the personality you have given your little bird that you carry along with you, perhaps, is you even when you have to be in the disguise required by work - feeling safe at home to let her out and play.
ReplyDeleteGlad she grabs those little notes for you along the way, so you can turn it into poetry.
"but her pulse
ReplyDeleteis untutored rhyme so she stays away
from gossips around the water cooler-"
she has better things to do with her time, luv her sense of time management
much love...
your songstress in velveteen is truly beautiful
ReplyDeleteNow that's a title I wish I'd thought of, Grace! I'm with your bird - I was always leaning out of glass windows when I worked in an office. I love the lines:
ReplyDelete'...her pulse
is untutored rhyme so she stays away
from gossips around the water cooler-
her sighs are blighted poetry
scribbled hurriedly on paper napkins'.
I love the second stanza with the 'wild song of the wind'
and the 'hoots of night creatures', but oh, what an ending!
What a unique and inspired mingling of beautiful words and scenes ... the effect is magical.
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