I. You fold me
in secret places
with your words
II. I am burning red
among yellowing leaves
tempting-
an apple
made lusciously ripe
by your secret thoughts
III. The tongue itches
prickling under thorns
as marauding bees descend
You regurgitate
spilling the secrets of seeds
IV. The taste of spice
of a stolen afternoon
The music that springs
By the strum of your hands
My love, the secrets we serenade to
V. The starlings weave
a million of them over the lake
a dance
to a music
only the wind secretly plays
VI. This bleeds
inside, gaping blue despite
your attempts to stitch it close
Teeth, elbows, claws
This secret lives
VII. Your heartbeat is my music
Opening me to secrets
of sky and faithful earth
VIII. Kiss by kiss
You unwrap me
As blackbirds flew
Under secretive eye of the moon
IX. You sugarcoat it
With cinnamon & vanilla
Richly layered with strawberries
Still the stink of your dark
secret haunts
you
X. I paint my secrets
with autumn jewelled hues
and seal them with beeswax-
Death, pry them loose from my stiff hands
and throw them to the river gorge
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - OpenlinkNight hosted by Gayle ~ Written in the style of Wallace Steven's poem: Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
Thanks for the visit ~
Oh my -- 4, 8 and 9. Mostly 4 -- delectably sensuous!
ReplyDeleteUm, can we have a sleepover? :)
ReplyDeleteI love the way this works its way, step by step. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI love this the whole way through, Grace! Sensual and colourful, it's not cubist - more Hundertwasser or Klimt in its richness.
ReplyDeleteA pas de deux of lovers dancing around secrets both passionate and destructive. Beautiful expressions.
ReplyDeleteI think this is one of the best 13 ways (okay, 10) poems that I've seen. Especially like 1, 4, and 5! Yessir, or M'am
ReplyDeleteCan't beat a stolen afternoon, sure words to make one swoon
ReplyDeleteNumbers 5 and 10 are spectacular. Sensual and yet at the same time, some distance and objectivity is read.
ReplyDeleteI love your list of secrets especially number four...or maybe there is no favorite, they're all so good!
ReplyDeleteThank you for letting us drift in these treasures for this while
ReplyDeleteHow lovely...especially love the last one!
ReplyDeletesecrets are sexy
ReplyDeleteThe effect of all these secrets is stunning. Each a little story... and of course there is a hidden blackbird inside.
ReplyDelete"I paint my secrets
ReplyDeletewith autumn jewelled hues
and seal them with beeswax-"
Aaaaah. This is soooo beautiful, Grace!
Wow, Grace! Honeyed secrets are sweet but some haunt us like a blackbird's shadow.
ReplyDeletelove how you show that secrets can be both positive or negative...and even how they are hard to keep sometimes.
ReplyDeleteGrace, love each snippet with its sensual imagery of the season and the secrets kept. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh my yes, Grace! Each a master work on its own. Together? Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteDeath, pry them loose from my stiff hands
ReplyDeleteand throw them to the river gorge
It will come with a big shock definitely!
Hank