Tuesday, May 17, 2016
The matriarch
If she was younger, she would be warrior
queen, zealously guarding her family
in times of war & upheaval
If she was even younger, she would be
a tall dark violet beauty with sassy tongue
& drinking hard with the guys
But alas, she was old when I met her
Cursing her gene for a long life
And her mother, still alive, crawling
on floor like a baby in her old age
frightened me and my sisters-
But she is always a warm breast to me
like a tropical sun
nurturing my awkward childish steps
while cursing her wayward sons to behave
They don't listen much to her anymore
but affectionately indulge her
when she tells them about her war-time escapades
It was a long time ago
Long before she became a widow
For time is running out fast
Her eagle eyes are now frail
Her bones are paper-light
And in the end, she was all silver
her feet bundled like a small bird-
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Character Study, hosted by guest Walter Wojtanik ~ Thanks for the visit ~
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These last lines are every bit as delicate as their subject:
ReplyDelete"And in the end, she was all silver
her feet bundled like a small bird-"
So beautifully said, Grace.
I'm finding the reading of the poems for this prompt to be very easy to read and envision. I think in the challenge presented we are reaching deep allowing our words to paint vivid brushstrokes. This is a wonderful study, Grace! Thank you for allowing me to read it!
ReplyDeleteVivid character sketch done beautifully. Lyrically. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHer eagle eyes are now frail
ReplyDeleteHer bones are paper-light
And in the end, she was all silver
her feet bundled like a small bird-
Lyrical and sweet. Such a gorgeous write.
Sad, how old age can be so cruel, to the ones, we love, like our moms. Would have love to met her, at her prime, and listen, to the stories that she could tell, of a different past, then we read, in the history books.
ReplyDeleteOne has their first history lessons from the parents & grandparents; first hand accounts of the Great Depression, WWII, & the WPA. This really rocks the prompt; everyone seems to be scoring high on the kudo chart today/tonight. Yes, your last stanza is stunning & touching.
ReplyDeletei do love how you capture her fragility in that last stanza. Sad to feel ignored when you still have wits... and imagine how the memories of war can only be understood through books. Wonderful write Grace.
ReplyDeleteSo far it seems many of us inherited our inspiration, while I come from a fairly well educated family none of them caught my form of education. Yes, Grace for one reason I went to the Pub and wound up tasting the brew there instead.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful comparison - I can see her in my mind's eye:
ReplyDeleteHer eagle eyes are now frail
Her bones are paper-light
And in the end, she was all silver
her feet bundled like a small bird-
Such a transition from the younger to the older. Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteOh this is wonderful to read....and the last paragraph is just stunning -- the difference between the warrior and this last stanza -
ReplyDeleteI so appreciate meeting her!
Beautifully worded... And the last four lines..loved reading them again n again!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully worded... And the last four lines..loved reading them again n again!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and moving. Yes, the last four lines are a dream.
ReplyDeletesMiLes.. even the
ReplyDeletegift of elders
talking grey
or frail..
or whatever
struggles liFE
may bRing.. getting
old is for stronger soUls
and never for sissies male
or female.. Living is for
moving.. connecting
and creating..
but take two
of those out
and its worse
than just one
old..
Poverty
of the SoUl
has no age..
gender.. nationality..
creed or race.. Poverty
of the heARt.. SpiRit and
SoUl.. simply has no radiating liGht..:)
Ooh.. what a beautiful read. I enjoyed the flow of your thoughts and this somewhat reminds me of one of Byron's poems.. And Thou art Dead, as Young and Fair. Great piece, Grace.
ReplyDeleteVivid and beautiful
ReplyDeleteAt least the ones round this frail lady affectionately indulge her rather rather insidiously make fun of her. So sad to see strength crippled. A sensitive piece.
ReplyDeleteOld age sure does become the great equalizer, getting us all one way or another.
ReplyDeleteA touching study of ageing. Growing old is not for wimps.
ReplyDeleteLife is reality, beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteIn addition . . . for me, life is a wheel of change, but I believe when we become frail that's when we become strong again.
DeleteI hope she shared her tales before it was too late. Thanks for sharing. Be well and have a wonderful weekend!
ReplyDeleteBeing of "an age", I can truly sympathize and understand these beautifully written words~
ReplyDeleteJan
I feel time tugging at your heroine here. This is a lovely and poignant write up.
ReplyDelete~Imelda
I loved the progression and transition of the poem from beginning to end...amazing job
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