Grace @ Everyday Amazing
pink blooms
bursting like waves
upon the cold spring breeze
garlands weave, casting aside leaves
and modesty, like sassy show troupers-
painting the sky iridescent-
and modesty, like sassy show troupers-
painting the sky iridescent-
i drink in your beauty
-swift as sunset-
pink blooms
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Sunday Mini-challenge - Rictameter
This is 9 line poem with the following rhyme scheme - 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 and the first and last lines are the same.
This is really pretty, Grace!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mama Zen ~
DeleteWhat a beautiful photo and accompanying poem, Grace!! Love those pink blooms.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary ~ I always see them in my afternoon walks ~
DeletePink blooms..always so beautiful to the senses. Lovely picture takes me in the moment.
ReplyDeleteThank you ~
Deletesassy show troupers...ha...yes, drink it in while it last....beauty is so very fleeting....so are they in your yard?
ReplyDeleteYes, they are around our parks, within our community ~ They are beautiful, aren't they ~
Deletevivid...
ReplyDeleteThank you ~
Deletelike sassy show troupers-
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words to fit the gorgeous image, Grace.
Thank you Kerry ~
Deletevery vivid,and hopeful..
ReplyDeleteabsolutely beautiful make me dream:)
ReplyDeleteThat's beautiful, well done, I was carried away on the accents
ReplyDeleteIt is SO like drinking...so quenching the beauty. Grace your image and words are heavenly! Thank you for bringing us your gift and this challenge!
ReplyDeleteNice one Grace. I assumed you had written the one about the tree in the challenge as well.
ReplyDeleteThank you Peggy but the tree example is not from me ~ Smiles ~
DeleteThis is so lovely.
ReplyDeleteBringing the beauty to life and yeah stupid cold breeze here too.
ReplyDeleteVery pretty. I took pictures the other morning of flowers. So fun to do. Then today we got some at Home Depot. More pictures. More fun.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful read of your weekend :-)
Beautiful! I love the photo as well!
ReplyDeletethose pink blooms are so sassy, i expect them to start a kick line any minute.
ReplyDeleteI can imagine them already ~ Smiles ~
DeleteYes!
ReplyDeleteA sunday sherbet for us this morning. Or do I mean sundae?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Grace, and perfect with that lovely photo!
ReplyDeleteI just posted mine. I wrote it at midnight, so thought I'd let it sit overnight while my brain caught up with the rest of me.
K
Pink blooms and so does your words ... this is beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteSassy show troupers ~~~ love the thought.
ReplyDeleteGrace, you must have done this form before... perfect. The internal rhyme was lovely, and I admired the truth of the phrase, "swift as sunset," well, don't you wish they stayed longer? I do! Thanks, Amy
ReplyDeleteI drink in the beauty of the photo and poem.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous Grace I love your view...
ReplyDeleteOff to post mine...
I love your challenge!
The verses fit in so well for the pic! the beginning and close with the same lines makes it so complete!
ReplyDeletebrilliant....the look of the verse, the words themselves....everything
ReplyDeleteYou caught a meaningful moment reflected in the poem and shot. The first three lines are stunning.
ReplyDeleteBlessings...
Rita
Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous =)
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