Photo credit: L. Diane Wolfe
let me
fall like dew drop
on your skin, stained of sun -
then carry me, weighed of gold, in
your palm-
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Mini-challenge
and Poets United
Poetry form: cinquain - 5 lines following 2-4-6-8-2 syllables
Grace,
ReplyDeleteWouldn't it be wonderful to affect those we love in this way~
Heavenly!
Yes, it would be Ella ~ Thank you for the wonderful challenge ~
DeleteThis is stunning Grace I love it =)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely lovely.
ReplyDeleteGolden indeed at your feed
ReplyDeleteo Grace... this is lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is romantic and gentle.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely it's dripping in fondness and desire. I have to read it again for the third time, as each gives reading of it gives me pause. It may be the rainy, kind of day, or rather that pleasing.
ReplyDeletedelightful lines.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteGrace--gentle, lovely, vulnerable----
ReplyDeletei like the play on the weight in this...falling light yet weighing as gold int eh hand when carried....lovely little short grace...
ReplyDeleteSo much beauty in so few lines. Wonderfully done!
ReplyDeleteA soothing, balm of treasured love, captures several hidden meanings in my imagination, and is nicely done in a few choice words. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThis is truly lovely, Grace.
ReplyDeleteThis is a gem of a poem. You have seen such a tender poetical image in the photo - and both work perfectly together.
ReplyDeleteAwesome ... awesome ... awesome !!!
ReplyDeletesplendid...
ReplyDeleteaah, this is grandiose!!!
ReplyDeleteA weighty drop! I am staying here awhile.
ReplyDeletebeautiful, eloquent
ReplyDeleteNice Conservation Of Words.
ReplyDeleteEach word perfect and beautiful poem and imagery in your words!
ReplyDeleteFilled with love and hope:)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful...love at its finest
ReplyDeleteGrace would be safer round my neck than in my palm. One is stiff and the other too easily curls into a fist.
ReplyDeletePowerful thoughts, lovely expression.
ReplyDeleteThis is perfect, Grace.
ReplyDeleteK
Ooo...so pretty, Grace! Love that, "weighed of gold..." such beauty in your brevity as always...thank you!
ReplyDeletesweet and romantic. Beautiful images, Grace. :-)
ReplyDeleteSimple and effective - thank you!
ReplyDeleteoh, my, Grace, I think this is my fave of all the poems you've written so far. So short, but such clear and strong message which actually hides all of my life wishes and goals - to be someone's soothing drop of life.
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely comments Dezzy, I appreciate this ~ Smiles ~
DeleteBeautiful and sweet Grace!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - thank you.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]